Fucking sad man. I could feel all the rage even though it is a story I mean I don't know what to say but it was good, real good. Damn if you wrote more it could have been a book

Nice work, good character developement, and an excellent ending for Riley. Never liked that guy :)

I really liked this story and would like to thank you for writing it. I am looking forward to the next part.

Very cool. But even a warrior can show compassion.

Looks like you've posted the first chapter twice

Excellent start. Xander must have had some major things happen to him.

This was a great story. I will be reading your this again. It was jusdt great.

I haven't read all the chapters in this new version as of yet and felt some trepidation, wondering whether it will be severely diluted and actually affect the atmosphere of the story.

I read chapter 5 and enjoyed. I unfortunately did not save your original version and if you could email them to me I would be grateful.

I agree with the other reviewers that having several chapters for each book would be best. I also do not have to wait so long for each installment...lol.

I do wonder what happened to Buffy...Did she die battling Glory as in the Jossverse and was she replaced by Dawn?

Will Faith be making her appearance early on the in the next book?

Keep up the good work

Obi

I haven't read all the chapters in this new version as of yet and felt some trepidation, wondering whether it will be severely diluted and actually affect the atmosphere of the story.

I read chapter 5 and enjoyed. I unfortunately did not save your original version and if you could email them to me I would be grateful.

I agree with the other reviewers that having several chapters for each book would be best. I also do not have to wait so long for each installment...lol.

I do wonder what happened to Buffy...Did she die battling Glory as in the Jossverse and was she replaced by Dawn?

Will Faith be making her appearance early on the in the next book?

Keep up the good work

Obi

A very interesting story.

I'd try and tell you how much I liked the story, but what I really want to do is encourage you to write more. Will saying it's a really neato fic help or would the use of the word "neato" regarding your fic scar you for life?

I think I'll just stick with the encouragement.

More please...

NIFTY!

this is regarding the entire story!

This is one of the better Xandercentric fanfictions out there. I like the way you have filled it with agnst(sp?), and how Xanders 'power' came with a price, its much better than the way so many people have written happy stories where somebody pops up and gives Xander, or character x for that matter, a large increase in power for virtually no price.

Please Continue this story, its great!

I would like to see volume 23 broken down into parts. There is no way, even as fast a reader as I am, that I could read a story as long as volume 1 in one day and all at once. I like the lenghts you broke vol. 1 into.

Glad this is back up. Still dont see why the took it off in the first place.

i agree with the other two reviews in that i believe that the original was within the R rating, if you want to revise then okay, but i don't believe that you need to.