that was amazing!

It is called supervised visitation...I totally agree with Jay!

Definitely want to see more with this family.

I appreciate all the writing you did. I loved this story so much but you ended it on a great note

Great last chapter

Amazing last chapter
I'm sad this story is finished but excited at the same time I loved he ending and meeting Natalie halstead
I can't wait for your other stories/new stories

Great ending to a fantastic story!
One shot: Erin and Jay have identical twins- boys... Ava is not too excited to have baby brothers, she wanted more baby sisters.

I really liked the whole story! Looking forward to The Comet and other stories you will write. :)

Amazing end, well done! :)

Make a sequel to this story PLEASE!

Amazing chapter
I've loved your entire story from day one and I'm so sad it's coming to an end but I'm really excited for what's in store for linstead in the epilogue, hopefully some more mini linstead's runnjng around!
UPDATE SOON!

Oh my gosh this story is perfection. I can't wait to read the last chapter then the one shots :) and I most certainly can't wait for the comet one shots :)

I really loved this story and look forward to more! Great job!

I love your writing and this story so I'm ready for more

awh, when people decide to end a story they get impatient and usually jump a bunch of time so it felt choppy :( also I wanted to see jay's reaction of erin in her wedding dress that would have been adorable