Welp, that was unexpected.

Damn Yami Malik though! Asshole, ruining my Darkshipping! Also, this now makes 4 fics I've read where there's Darkshipping and Yami Marik / Malik does something to screw it up. Hopefully Bakura's kicking his ass into next year.

HOLY CRAP -

*rapidly clicks the next button*

Yeah, I'm definitely with Bakura from later chapters on this one - Yami should let them come to him and accept whatever apology they give, and then move on. I don't see why Yugi is telling Yami to apologise when he didn't do anything wrong and he definitely shouldn't apologise for feeling the way he does. Nerts to Yugi's attitude in general, anyhoo.

And again nearly everyone acts like Yami only matters in relation to Yugi. I'm surprised he wasn't a little angrier about the fact they think he should be able to handle anything because he's strong and then they immediately blame him when he can't, and then favour Yugi, when it's the fact that he constantly protects Yugi that put him in that position in the first place. Unless he was mad but couldn't articulate that well. Some friends you are, Anzu and Honda.

But it was at least generally believable since they'd been locked out of the loop.

Also, why does Yugi just accept Yami saying he wants to be his guardian again? Can Yugi seriously not grow a pair and try and look out for himself?

Great story. Glad that yami is better now and all of his friends are back.

To be honest, I preferred Submission, which I thought was a more satisfying story, but the first one is always the best, no? For a sequel, this is pretty good. When I first saw there was a sequel I was wondering how you could even come up with a sequel to a story like Submission, but you managed it. The idea of the tape is something I wouldn't have come up with, and it made a great story.

Again, I'm glad Bakura showed up, and that he had a bigger role in this story. It worked well for the plot, and it was nice to explore his character a little as well as Yami's.

This was definitely a good read, and it kept me hooked from the first chapter to the last.

Waaaaaaaaw it's the best story I ever read about yugi... i read the 2 stories ... exciting ...COMPLETED... fantastic
the most important thing

IT'S NOT YAOI (( hate that thing))

You'v done amazing job in expressing feelings ... pain...hurt...
You'v made me drown in my imagnaition becouse of your writting skill ...

and to tell the truth ... I am arabian and i write stories in arabic for yugi ...
you'v inspired me ... for some of my ideas.. of course i turn it to the arabic style

On with the story..
i liked the ending ... so much ...
And for bakura i loved him for the first time 0o0...

and for yami my heart was broken ... but i liked every little Detail ... his personality... his suffering ... his way to deal with things ... he was strong and i loved him more and more than before .. thank u so much
Keep the amazing work ... good luck
I ll cheer for you ... _

That was briliant! Loved every word of it :)

hi! so i know that this story was written a few years ago but i just wanted to say that this story is literally one of my favorites! i remembered only a little part of it, (when he dyed his hair) and i have been looking for it in my favorites for months! i just wanted to say that it is just as good, if not better, than the way i remembered it and i just wanted to let you know that its fantastic! if you ever decide ti write in fanfiction again i have you on author alert so you will hear from me again!

Again, good job on the plot. Pity Malik had to die, but, oh well... Cool, Yami gets to have white hair!

I read your first story to this and absolutely loved it, but you really out did yourself on this. LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY. Also, I love the fact that Yami's eyes and hair changed. Interesting thought. Creative too. YAY FOR YOUR AMAZING STORY!

D ty for this story its awsome! i feel bad yami had to go though all that but every things better now, but there is only one thing bothering me...what color is his eyes? i don't see the color anywhere all it said was yami's white hair color xD

I suck at reviewing... But I liked the happy ending :) great st

B-Ba-Bakura! N-nooooooo D:

BUT HE SHOULD BE DEAD DX poor poor poor (x10000) Yami!