thank you for another amazing story, I totally binged it today. maybe a sequel?

All I know is that I'm pretty sure Sarah J. Maas's books use FAE, and if you're into this genre, I HIGHLY recommend her books, Throne of Glass especially.

If Puck is a god damn cat I will tear your eyes, shove a cock(chicken) down your throat, and burn you alive, but besides that it is good

So yet again this stupid writes ff where the person responsible for being ignored harry being the victim like in the last ff was Hermione and here lily and harry should forgive het after all she was not out of her will ignoring her right ? How stupid this ff is

Seriously, your spelling is awful! Fleur is not a vela, she's a veela. And it's bred, not bread - bread is the stuff you eat. Get help!

What happened in this chapter? Your spelling suddenly went completely wrong. Did you lose your beta?

Ugh...you are setting this up with a harry Ginny. I fucking hate that pairing. If that happens I am done. Period

Wonder how long till Lilly figures out Harry is the one who stopped Voldermort and not Brian.

Attacking and trying to arrest the Queen, yeah like that isn't an act of war or anything. Stupid arrogant bigots.

The best way to handle spells in other languages or other speech based language is to do it just in Italics, then add for ex: Fleur said in French or even start of chapter just say what language the italics are for. Putting say typed French in chapter for multiple lines then translation at the very end is annoying for having to scroll back n forth and adding it after the typed French as part of the same paragraph is messy and both methods pad the word count. Some are worse who don't even offer translation at all.

Wouldn't be surprised if Snape was the one to curse Lilly, he is the type of the "if I can't have her then no one can" even in cannon he only begged for Lilly's life not James or anyone else, he wasn't in love with her or loved her he was obsessed with her.

This was very nice, I’m glad that I didn’t point out the grammar/spelling faults bcos I would’ve looked like a total arse and felt bad to boot

Great story!

I enjoyed reading your story. I'm not that fond of Harry/Ginny-pairings, but liked a few of your original plots, for example Sirius and what happened to Voldemort. Thanks for sharing!

loved it, very well written and portrayed !