Aww this is sooo cute!

Oh dear, I can SO imagine this! I wasn't originally a fan of SaiIno, but Inojin sure makes up for it.

Lol this is very hilarious! The Yamanaka clan is really my favorite and you nailed them all perfectly XD I love of how Sai had to sleep at Naruto’s because Ino was upset at him XD great fic! I wish there’s more Yamanaka fanfics like yours out there!

This is hilarious and gold!

HAHA! ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE! After reading it, I understand why this one is so popular!
Throughout this one-shot, smile was on my face the entire time. Plot wise was really good. It has been seen before but that doesn't make it less boring. In fact I think you made it your own by adding a lot of humour into it which cracked me up. Which leads me to the dialog. They were so hilarious! Even though I expected them, because we have Sai in this story, you surprised me anyway with the insulting comments. You nailed Sai's behaviour perfectly! This now leads me to the character. Without a doubt I like Sai in this one. He is basically how a good husband and father should be. He was indeed very likeable in this one, with out a doubt. And the thought he had at the end about being called papa, nice way to conclude the story.

So in conclusion, it was a very VERY nice one-shot about a father-son moment. KUDOS to you! I'm going to tick that favourite box now, because you know what? You deserve it!

What a cute and funny fic! I wouldn't have thought that would be Inojin's first word, but it seems all too fitting since he's his father's son, after all. I cracked up so loud when Sai delivered that insult to Naruto, and when he told Inojin he wanted him to grow up with a father. Lol!

What a great fic to end my day with. Thank you for writing this!

I love reading stories from people who's mothertongue isn't English. Mostly because they usually do so good XD You did fine by the way. I will only mention one thing:

When using the word 'neither', you always pair it with 'nor'. For example:

"I neither like you nor your brother!" (Correct)

Not:

"I neither like you or your brother!" (Incorrect)

Similarly with 'either' and 'or'.

Remember, "Neither" - "Nor". "Either" - "Or"

You did pretty well with the story though! I loved it and the concept XD It was amusing and I love the Yamanaka Family! Inojin is adorable and there is just something very appealing about the SaIno couple. Good job!

From a fellow FRM member,

~Poodie

Hahahahaha.. So cute.. I love SaixIno family fluff.

Omg! This is so damn cute. Well, doesn't have almost any fanfics about Inojin out there, and I thought I was very lucky of find that one. Seriously, this is one of the best fanfics I ever read! Oh, forgive my bad grammar, because, just like you, I am not fluent in English, and my first language is portuguese (unfortunately, I am brazilian) and this language is pretty different. Again, amazing fanfic, and Yamanaka family is awesome! Oh, a have a little question for you: Sai doesn't have any clan, so when Sai marry Ino, he start being part of the Yamanaka clan, right? And now his full name is Sai Yamanaka right? Please, love, answer me! Kisses

This was a really hilarious yet also endearing fic. Especially since it seems like something Inojin would probably have as his first words as he's a little devil just like his father.

SAIcasm. Haha! I like his sarcasm and how he delivered it with fake smile. Lol!

Best/cutest/funniest lines of the fic for me:

1) "Mommy is on a D-rank mission, -to empty out daddy's wallet.-"

2) "Come one, say 'Ma-m-ma', the faster you said it, the faster you can call me papa."

3) "Of course Hinata-chan would not scream, you can't make her. Are you sure that kid is yours? Dickless."

4) "Please, I want you to grow up with a father."

5) "She washed your mouth with soap? Didn't she?"

These made me smile. Haha.

"Please, I want you to grow up with a father" best line XDDD
This is adorable and funny. Thank you for writing this :D sign,
misorai

This is cute and funny! xD I also think that Inojin is adorable.

Muahahaha the story's so cute until inojin said that first word, made me crack in laugh XD Love it!

You seriously have a knack for writing humour. I was nice to see the emotionless Sai, be the center of all these conflicting emotions. The line, ' I want you to grow with a father', and the dishwashing bit were very nice.

Have a nice day :) :) :)