| Reviews for The Guardian-Part II |
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country-chick-20 chapter 30 . 2/5/2019 It has taken me weeks thanks to work and researching potential college classes but I finally finished this story and it was well written and very intriguing |
Yvette chapter 30 . 9/2/2018 You are a great writer and story teller! I truly enjoyed both pats I and II. I hope to see more Blue Bloods stories written by you. Thank you for sharing it! |
carlea chapter 30 . 9/15/2016 would love for you do do another segment and focus on danny's time in the academy and his relationship with Jamie. I enjoyed both parts of this. And I do hope there will be more. |
Cat1382 chapter 1 . 8/23/2016 Please please write and continue the story from guardian 2. I really have enjoyed both stories and hopefully get to enjoy Guardian 3. Thank you for the great writing and storyline |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2016 Please write guarantee part 3 |
as084 chapter 30 . 3/30/2016 Too sad it's the end, I could have go on reading that like forever...hope you decide to continue at some point ;-) Loved the read the first part too, kept me banned in front of my PC for hours- keep on writing that kind of stories...I love to read more! Thank you for sharing... |
hudson911 chapter 30 . 8/4/2015 Wow, bittersweet ending it was. It's great to see everyone coming into their own and starting new adventures. I have absolutely no qualms about the Jamie starting grade 12 and killing it, nor Danny entering into the police academy and Erin onto law school. Looks like some possible changes for Frank and Henry too. If you ever decide to continue on with the journey of our dear Reagan's, I would love to read it. Thanks for the great story! |
Guest chapter 30 . 8/2/2015 OK yes I am crying! I can't believe it's over (for now?) AND I FOR ONE AM NOT A UNAPPRECIATIVE LURKER! I know I have thanked you in the past and I am going to THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN FOR WRITING A FABULOUS STORY! I do wish you would have gotten into more of Jamies issues with being molested and those pictures of know what they were and who they were of. I for one am hoping this is not the end. If you could talk to my friends they would all tell you how I lived on the computer looking for you story and once it was posted they had to leave me alone until I read it. This is hard for me to say but my moms birthday is coming up on the 13th and she is no longer with us. But I can tell you right from her mouth how I never read anything but Patricia Cornwell (which is her favorite author) and for her to see me reading your stories faithfully would give her such great pride. In my book you are a fabulous writer! And this may be coming from only 1 person but I hope you know that to effect 1 person brings me the greatest joy. I kinda think we come from the same DNA I suffer the same as you and I only can wish that your stories bring me so much joy and something to look forward too. I know I haven't been following CF like I should but I have been addicted to Hawaii five 0 so as soon as I get caught up with those I swear I will read your Chicago Fires! |
reader82 chapter 30 . 8/2/2015 I knew this was the end and so I couldn’t bring myself to read it earlier. As curious as I was about the epilogue I just didn’t want to see this wonderful story end. I think you already know my opinion about another segment. Whenever you feel like it I’d love to read more from “The Guardian Series”. This was an appropriate ending to an amazing ride. I loved that you brought closure for so many characters and side plots. The job for Alan was great. It was nice to see a glimpse of everybody’s plans for the next year as well as their thankfulness for what they got. Really bittersweet last chapter but I’m grateful for this story. Thank you for the good times I had reading it. Every chapter was so well written and you put so much heart into the story. Thanks. |
accounting professional chapter 30 . 8/1/2015 Great chapter. I loved the ending was a beginning of the next chapter of their lives. |
Cissyaliza chapter 30 . 7/31/2015 Very good end and I really hope you'll write suite to know how familie grows now! Thanks for this very good second (and not last) part! |
maria.smith.9256 chapter 30 . 7/30/2015 A lovely final chapter and I agree the right place to finish Part 2. They are all starting a new chapter in their lives so Part 3 will be a good place to read about their progress and how they are coping. You know I love BB so look forward to a new story soon! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2015 I've been trying to get the other authors on here to write this prompt, but no one will do it. Could you maybe? 14 year old Jamie gets hurt at soccer practice, and when he tries to tell Danny or his parents no one will listen to him. His injury gets worse and Danny and Jamie get into a fight, after Danny pushes Jamie, he notices Jamie is really hurt and takes him to the hospital. Injury: torn ligaments in knee. And then the whole family feels guilty. I have a long plane ride tomorrow and would love some good teen Jamie hurt or sick stories! THANK YOU! |
mcgeeksgirl chapter 30 . 7/30/2015 Hey...I lloved both segments to the Guardian and would love to read a third about Danny's time at the Academy and Jamie's senior year and of course the hurdles they will face, Henry retiring and Frank moving up...I will read anything u write! Ur an awesome writer and can't wait for ur next BB story! |
Charlottarosa chapter 30 . 7/29/2015 Aww great ending! But sad to see this story end though :( Hope you write a sequel one day :) Thanks for writing this story. |