Will you make a second part to this story because it is my favorite one on fanfiction?

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

Yes, but a more scary thought, would be her having a chess piece, that combines both Rook & Bishop or Rook & Knight, mainly because Sakura will be getting extra reserve or speed, to go along with her Rook Attribute.

believe me when I say women are deficult to please in a harem I may only 4 but fuck the stigma needed in a five way is enormous but it's worth it

any particular reason you always put Kurenai's name in the opposite order of everyone else? Kurenai is her first name, Yuhi is her family name. So if you named her as you do everyone else, it should be Yuhi Kurenai.

This is less of a story and more of a harem of lemons. I try to keep reading but just no real plot, a whole clan of OCs, and other things. Good luck to you. Needs more of a real plot line

Lol I agree with Naruto that naming the raikage A is a bit redundant and confusing but I am reminded of the movie escape from NY. You are the duke you are A number 1. Lol

You know the art of war is something I’ve been meaning to read for some time. The man even a few hundred years dead should really be grinning in his grave at the royalties he could be getting. I wonder if he has any family alive today

C section is short for caesarean section. In case you didn’t know

Have to admit I avoid hinata shipping where possible. Not cause I don’t like it as I agree she suits canon Naruto well. I just feel it’s overdone. That said I tend to go with Ino tenten or the ice queens mostly even though they are also overdone. Either way interesting fic so far. Well done

great work

naruto seems to be getting more adhd by the chapter. How the fuck could he be more together and composed when he was 4, 6, or 8 than at 16? Are his women literally fucking his brains out?

Bit too much canon seeping in, like the inclusion of kabuto and so on.

ok, any thought of having this naruto go to kuoh as a student is just dumb. having him visit, sure, having him visit fairly often even. But he heads his own clan, is an active shinobi of konoha, has an assload of wives, kids on the way, loads of people he's responsible for...

No fucking way can you make it work to send him to kuoh as an actual student. Fuck, rias has far less going on on her end, she should go to konoha, she's only got a handful in her peerage, she's only an heir at most, not a clan head, makes no sense.

Throwing naruto into the canon DxD events can be done sure, but mostly on a case by case basis, he happens to visit when some big event or other is going on.

the uzumaki wedding thing was just dumb. a month of sex in an open arena. Did the whole fucking clan just vanish for the whole time any time 2 uzumaki's married?

And sure, people can always just afford to vanish for a MONTH, plus however long it takes to recover from that long of just having sex. And how do they even survive, where's the food and water to live on?

Why is everyone fighting on Narutos behalf? Hes such a passive bitch in this story man. I hsvent seen him initiate or be the agressor or be a man.