i love the story but your not gonna get a lot of readers if you don't the a bit to cocky and that turns people it a get rid of the last chunk and keep th first part

I'm gonna give this a shot.

But I see shipping I'm leaving cause I'm sick of shipping right now.

Lol. Yeah, yay Roy's here. My weakness is all things Roy.

Lolollolololololololol

Where's Roy? WHY DOES NO-ONE REMEMBER ROY?!

I'm fucking done xD

ROSALINA IS NOT A VILLAIN!

...Can Rosie be in here? Pretty please?

Great series, man! I'd love to help you come up with ideas and possibly write some! :D Smash and Tomodachi Life...2 amazing games! I'll make an account soon.

I think the reason you're not getting many reviews/views is because of the summary. I'd recommend fixing it. Other than that, great story! Will other Smashers be included? I'm fine with whatever you do so write on, dude!

HOW DOES THIS STORY NOT HAVE MORE VIEWS?! But in all seriousness, this is a great story. I look forward to reading more!

This is HILARIOUS. Please keep it up!

...Pffft...I'm really peeling it...