Wait does that mean out of JNPR and RWBY, only Pyrrha, Jaune (Who I am assuming is Yin's father), Weiss, and Ruby survived? Also, Patch is right in-front of Vale...a easy step-stone for a inland invasion.

Dang this is pretty good! I have a feeling that Jaune's is Yin father but that's just me. I wonder what Weiss and Ruby are planning though. It doesn't sound like their the good guys anymore.

Team YANG...damn that must have hurt.

You should take a look at the punctuation around the dialogues - there are some mistakes, and at times there isn't any punctuation at all when there should be.