give me the ootoro! xD

I really like this story! *Grins* PLEASE write more!

Thank you for this story! I was looking for some good one to read when I found this one. It's so great and with a happy and cozy atmosphere. I love it! And you do not have to worry you've made a very well written Izaya in my opinion. He is a very complex character indeed but you put it off. Nice job!

Ah I just read this and Freudian Slip before and I'm so in love! The way you write Izaya and Shizuo is absolute perfection! Waaaaiiii! I totally need a sequel to this! You should feel confident in your skills you're an amazing writer and the more you write (and read) of ze smut the better you're sure to get! Please write a sequel I will be eternally grateful! I need more of your amazing characterisation! Cheers!

wow me gustó mucho esta secuela.
Esperaré muy ansiosa para leer otra de tus historias :D

PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER SEQUEL! 3

I can not overstate how amazing this is! I think you captured to characters perfectly (instead of making Shizuo a mindless sadist who doesn't care about hurting anyone as long as he gets off, and making Izaya a blushing uke who is oh-so delicate you actually kept their power struggle), and the scene with Shizuo kissing Izaya for the first time was brilliant! So, so, so realistic and much better than the "first-kiss-but-can-do-it-perfectly" sort of scene that usually pops up in fanfics. Ahhh! So perfect!

I'll definitely be checking back to see if you've written one.

This story was awesome! I do hope to see another sequel for it. Also your English is just fine. You write better than some native English speakers I know.

Ahh! This sequel was absolutely amazing! I drooled and fangirled over the Shizaya dry humping scene. How Izaya managed to still talk to Mikado while his underwear was wet, we'll never know. Hahaha! Looking forward to another sequel if there ever is one. ( o; v;)o

Beautiful again! I really loved this part too! Izaya was so frustrated that Shizuo didn't turned out to be the beastly and godly seme that he sounded like xD It was really funny and interesting to imagine those scenes. Hope gl hear from you soon enough with another sequel!

Salut j'ai vu que t'étais française (enfin je crois) et j'ai la flamme d'écrire en anglais xD
Juste pour dire que c'était super j'ai adoré merci pour ce sequel c: Ouais je suis pas douée pour les commentaires désolée xD

me want sequel now! now damn it!

It was awesome! :D

sorry i was a bit lazy to log in but i wanted to post a coment on how awesome this story and its prequel are :)
thanks for writing them and posting them and i hope you end up writing a sequel to this one too
love it and until next time

Great fic, though during the lime scene you mention a bed, and there was not bed in the alleyway... Thought I'd let you know, and other than that confusion everything was amazing. Instead of making Shizuo this natural sex god, you kept to him being mostly protozianish (lack of a better term). While you had Izaya as the talented one. I am disappointed that there wasn't a "third-date" incident, but I'm certain you'll get to one soon enough. Thank you for writing this, and I loved the lengthiness of it!

KKKAAAYYYY
Now like I promised xD HERE I AM XDDD AGAIN XD
SOOO, just to make clear:
THIS WAS EVEN BETTER THAN THE FREUDINA SLIP! *0*
OMG OMG OH MY FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDD!
OoO ! NOSEBLEED XD
This wow, I MEAN WOW! THIS WAS JUST EVEN MORE AMAZING! I eman - how the fucking HELL CAN YOU DO THAT?!
THis was so HOT - fuck I NEVER READ ANYTHIGN THIS HOT O.O
NOT EVEN LEMONS FOR GODS SAKE WERE that HOT xDDDD
FUCK what willhappen to me if the OOtoro happenes?! O.O
I think.. I am GONNA DIE FROM NOSEBLEED XD
FUCK, You are great at this! Seriosuly! Awesome!
You neednt worry about a single thing!
YOu didnt feel confident enought o write the OOtoro part yet? DO NOT WORRY xD
Feel the confidence! BE CONFIDENT!
YOU SHOULD BE!
YOu know why? xD
CAUSE YOU ARE FUCKING AWESOME! XD
I a repeating myself xDDD
Okay, you are- ASTONISHING! *0*
Seriously, this is just wWOWOWOWOWOOWWOWOO! *0* *-*
You say youre NOT good at writing M-rated scenes?!
FUCK YOURE THE BEST! xD
How can you say that? xD
Seriously!
This was hotter than anythign I ever read!
And dont say DAMN it was long- it should be - BE GRATEFULL BITCHES I GAVE YOU THAT MUCH TO READ XDDD
NO_ONe is gonna say this was too LONG xD Seriously xDDD
Who the heck would? xD Itsliek watching your most favourite aniem series- no.-one is gonna say, sorry it was so long xDD
Everyone would be like, waht? 366 episodes is till not enough! More!
19971 words? NOT ENOUGH ! xD WANT MOOOREEE ! xD
This is by no means beginners luck! x3
Please, you are a genious! realize it god damnit! xDD
YOUre GREAT!
haha, and I know waht you mean xDD Yeah Izaya really kinda deserves a whle new dimension for his way of thinking xDDD
by the way- you did that PERFECT! That way of his thinking! x3
Just wow, really, I never read anyhtign like this! ... I think I said this before xD Ah nevermind xDD
Its just the truth! *0* *-*
AND OMG- SERIOUSLY?!
SHITTY M-rated scene?!
...
Are you fucking serios?! xD
YOu . NEED. TO BE more Cofident! xD
SAY IT out LOUD! : THIS SCENE WAS AMZING!
NOW believe it already! xD
For gods sake xD this is like Rukagawagf saying.. actually what I write is crap PFFFTTT What a joke xDDD
AND OMFG YES!
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER SEQUEL!
I WOULD LOVE YOU TO NO ENDS FOR IT!
JUST OMG PPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!
I BEG you!
xD
Fuck I wanna read so bad how his is going to continue! OMG
You keep me on the edge of my seat you know that? xD
Fuck, so damn curious!
by the way xD I just checked out your reviews you got so far xD
Just saying on a sideline- dont get dragged down if someone says something negative about your story... -.-
Izayas talking about the Freudina slip and everything was perfectly fine, i loved it in fact, I wouldnt have wanted him to shut up. And taht sex part was amazing! DONT you dare CHANGE ANYTHING about your style of writing or handling this- At least NOT BECASUE SOMEONE ELSE SAID SO. Glares at the review below me. xP
Its your story, write however the fuck you want! :3 Its is perfect and tehre is a reason youre listed at the top five of the "Newgeneratio post" xD Did you see taht one already? ;3
If not you should check it out cause you appear there xD
Dont worry about the psychological detail of just waht would suit best. the suspension bridge effect WAS PERFECT for this. END. NO BUT.
THER WAS NO PLOTHOLE- NOt at all! Dont worry about it. ;3
AND Anri wasnt OOC xD Nope xD I see her XACTLY like that xD
It was perfectly fine!
Really!
SO NOW Imma GONNA TELL YOU EXACTLY WHAT I FELT WAS GREAT:

The beginning- PERFECT transition! From the last "chapter"/story, Freudian slip to now. It immediately drags you back right into the story, without any effort at all- I was like- new sequel.. okay, hopefully this isnt gonna start now when tehy either already jumped over their shadows or they jsut kind "forgot" what happened and went back to their old routine xD
that happnes often xD
But OH FUCK was I Happy when i saw it was just starting away where it ended at exactly the same great pace as before!
Great entrance to the story!
Now- lets move on:
OMG xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Izayas retort XDDDDD the FLOWERS xDDD The do t in the dark alley stuff xDDDDDDDD OMG You cracked me up so hard xDDD I cant even xDDD
I LOVED THE SCENE! xDD then the fact taht Izaya sent those gangs after him jsut so they would pester Shizuo so he couldnt sleeop, cause he couldnt sleep as well cause he spent so much time thinking about waht he said xDDDDDDD
haha, and tehn- when he RAN! OoO Even before you wrote that for HSizuo it kinda felt like Izaya ACTUALLY ran away, it was already kinda clear, and jsut gave this special feeling to the whole chase, this kind of fear Izaya almost had cause SHizuo really chased to get him this time and not stopping to throw things-
It was really amazing how you described this whole scene! Really, I admire you so much for this!
This special feeling thsi cahse gave off was just amazing!
In so many ways!
Wow- simply WOW.
And OMG When Shizuo finally realized, just what it was that irked him about the fleas behaviour, and LAUGHED about it, it felt so natural, jsut so in character- so- I laughed with him xDDD
That feeling of suddenly realizeing and that kind of funnyness of this whole thing was just amazing xD
It felt so natural, so -of course this would happen- like xD But all in the good ways- really, I loved this part so much xDD
When Shizuo thought about well this is okay for the flea but this not?! And I was like laughing too cause xD hell he is right xDD
AND OMG Shizuos talk wiht CElty! xD It was awesome in so mayn ways! xD I didnt even get teh missunderstanding at first xD I was jsut that absoberd into the story I was like slipping into the mind of Shizuo and thinking like him when i read it and didnt even realize what was going on at the end. xD Only when i detached myself from it and thought abotu ti I started laughing as fuck xD
Your writing is incredible!
I never every had that happpen to me xD
To get that caught up in the story- it is amazing!
And the alines xDDDDD I was laughing so hard when izaya said he found it funny taht Shizuo thoguht he could exorcise aliens with salt xDDD
And og I was so surprised when izaya was suddenly gripped by Shizuo! OoO!
Omg xD
I was like HOLY FUCKING- WHAT?! Shizuo?!
Just as surprised as Izaya was for a second xD
this was so amazing! And omg the suspense i was iterally on the edge of my seat, waiting adn thinking OMG... WHAT is gonna happen NOW!?
Anf OH DAMN- you didnt disappoint me xD
FUCK This was jsut perfect! xD Instead of just getting dow to it xDD that "Shizuo that was a kiss?" and taht smug expression on his face xDDDDDD
I could imagine it clearly xD I was laughing as much as Izaya when SHizuo looked at him taht way xD#And i was fangirling so much when Izaya said that wasnt even a real kiss- try again!
OoO! OMG *0* *0* NOSEBLEED WHN THEY STARTED to KISS!
I mean for REAL!
When SHizuo snapped out of his- gentleness- OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
WOW This was UTTERLY ASTONISHING!
I mena WOWOWOWOOWOWWOWOO! *-*
I am speechless xD I dont knwo waht to say xD It couldnt have been more perfect! xD
I love this so muhc, adn it was so hot FUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCKKKKKK
OMG The fucking LUSTTTT! When Izaya sked if Shizuo wanted to fuck himm ha... OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
NOSEBLEED JUST AT THE FUCKING THOUGHT! *0*
OH WOW!
This was AMAZING!
As I said BEFORE- I dindt even read a LEMON so far- and holy fucking shit, believe me when i say I read A LOT in my live already, - THAT I CONSIDERED THIS HOTTER THAN ANYTHING I READ SO FAR!
NOTHIGN can COMPETE with this SCENE!
NOTHING! YOU HEAR ME?! NOTHIGN AT ALL! This was teh HOTTEST SHIT I EVER READ!
AMAZING!
XD ANd wehn Izaya left xD Omg xDD Omg XD OMg xDD What he fucking said! xD I cant even! xD
This was just so perfect so! OMG WOW!
OH OH OH and when THEY TAKED ON THE PHONE! *0* this was AMAZING!
the way they talked so casually! The way they omg xD
HOw Izaya tried to jsutify his own behaviour by using the suspension brisge explanation xDDD And when SHizuo came to THAT conclusion! xD
OH WOW XD
And that LAST line! IT KILLED ME! xDD
Oh wow, so amazing! I swear! This wholes tory is jsut as amazinga s it could be *0* *-* *0*
I never NEVER SERIOUSLY NEVER read anythign I LOVED THIS MUCH!
Not even Love blind eyes- which was my most favourite story of all times up until now- CAN COMPETE WIHT THIS xD NOt even taht! xD
Youre now my most favourite author of all times- and I really admire you!
Soooo
Long review was long xD
I hope you dont mind my partial randomness or screaming xDDD
I just LOVE this story so much! x3
And I am sssooooooooooo damn looking forward to another SEQUEL!
OMG PLEase! xD
I want ot read this so bad, I cant even describe it xD

Well, then, my most favourite AWESOME author of all times- thats it xD
Dont listen too much to negative things, there are always people who have to critizize something, and there arey always people who might be envious of your story xD
Just keep in mind the follwoing: You write for yourself, okay? :3 You write cause you want to write those two and how they come together, you write because you want to write, because you enjoy to write, not to please all of your readers xD
Never forget that ;3

Well then thank you for writing this astonishing story! If you ever need motivation or help with something, even though I might not be a great help, you can ask anytime xD
Would be an honour for me x3 Never doubt your overly awesome writing skills! Cause oyu h