I admit it wasn't exactly relief ending... But the fact that Kaito and Shinichi will always be together forever is a satisfying enough.

I Love they way they get closer and fall in love and just together...
I'm so glad when Kaito successful rescued Shinichi in the smooth way.
I'm just so happy they're Together again and always be.

Awesome story ...
. Love the plot and all kaishin scenes ...
Will there be a sequel?
If there will be ...then plz UPDATEEEEE

This is beautiful and I love how you didn't talk about Shinichi's parents at all

. A little sad but sweet. I like the bit where Jii runs a postal bird service. Very suitable, hehe. It kind of sounds like a beginning though as opposed to an end.

Honestly, I love your writing so much :') This was beautiful, thank you for sharing it with us.

This was a really nice finishing chapter, although it does feel a bit abrupt to me. But this story was overall a great read, I liked it! Well done!
I'm looking forward to the next chapters of 'Lyrical Spices', 'Heart of a Spell' and 'Different Suns' and obviously to more stories from you. :3

Sad to see this end but at least Shinichi and Kaito are together. I loved this fic and though the ending was melancholy, it was hopeful as well and I thought it was great. I can't wait to read more of your future stories. :)

WAIITT! T-THIS IS THE ENDING?! B-B-B-BUT!— *cries

This is a wonderful fic dear author! I'm very sad that this is the end (maybe a sequel pleaseeee?) I've followed this fic from the first chapter and each update after that brings me joy and wonder~! So, thank you for writing this fic. I seriously like the AU.

I'll miss the time when an update of this fic will never shows in my notification again.

Author, I like your writing style and how wonderfuly you describe the characters even when it was AU. The settings is great and I like the love that blossomed between our dear KaiShin.

I hope to see more of your works in the future, author!
Good luck for that!
Thank you very much for writing and sharing this wonderful work of yours!

Love,
-SKY-

I didn't really remember anymore what happened previously, so I just reread the entire story. And I still really like it!
Great chapter! I'm so glad Kaito got to Shinichi on time. I wonder if they will be able to rescue the others too.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :3

Waaaaaa this chapter end has killed me, poor Shinichi, Kaito's here now though, they'll get out together some how. And Kaito definitely not the time to joke around like that. Great chapter can't wait for more!️

Oh jeez...this loOKs pretry bad...

Omg, omg, omg! This was so intense! But I felt cold hot anger AND dread while reading near the end... Oh my, I hope Kaito gets to poor Shin-chan in time! D,: Being taken to bed or scorpion pits sound good at all, ugh... I hope the other children are able to get out, too! Haibaraaaaaa! Dx
Sigh, this cliffhanger is even worse than the one before. Oh well. Can't wait to see your next chapter~! :] You're seriously one of my most favorite Kaishin writers! w

I’m glad you updated this story _ I particularly liked the scene when Kaito went back to visit the lake. It was very poignant. And Shiho was awesome, hehe. Very like her.

Great story, I seriously don't know why I haven't read it yet. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hope Kaito will rescue Shinichi on time. :)

You go Kaito! I feel like the princess will find a way around his situation in his own way, but Kaito will certainly be there for support! Shinichi's too righteous and stubborn for his own good... I like his mindset though. Great job and update soon!