There's a good story in here, I know it.

But the author's free use of the apostrophe makes reading it painful!

I can accept referring to the Black family members as Black's, even though that is a very incorrect usage.
But to use the same word for both "Now we're going shopping" (correct)
and "the Blacks we're well known" (incorrect)
really, *really* grates on the nerves.

hint: we're is short for WE ARE
If your sentence does not make sense with that substitution, then you are doing it wrong.

Interesting idea sad it's been tossed

In the last scene of this chapter with Dumbledore and Remus Lupin; i find it wonderful that a werewolf says "bite me" to someone! Keep up the good work!

of all the names, only Gaunt has me worried.

xxx Kudos xxx : )

I like the idea of this story. Unfortunately, it's a little too fast-pace, slightly unrealistic, and has a couple of plot holes. And since all that happened in just chapter one, I can't continue.
The fast-paced beginning is what led to most of the unrealistic complaints I have. It seems Bella and Sirius had been stuck in Azkaban for approximately five years, yet there were no signs of insanity that I noticed in Bellatrix at all. Unless the suddenly nice to the point of OOC counts as madness. Perhaps if you had spent the whole of the first chapter focusing solely on building the relationship between Sirius and Bellatrix, maybe through snippets of interactions with timeskips here and there, their decision to break out together and then raise Harry together would make more sense. Since we as readers are to assume that everything that happened in your HP universe was canon up until the beginning of this fic. And canonically, Bella was a crazy murderess.
The main plot hole I had with the fic was that no one noticed Bella and Sirius escaped from Azkaban for at least a week. I can understand 24 hours because of guard rotations or whatever, and the fact that they used magic to make it seem like they were still in their cell, but the dementors at least would notice that they were only getting emotions off of one of the "prisoners" while the other was, for all intents and purposes, dead. Also, it would be noticed by someone, fairly quickly, that the guard was missing. Unless he was a recluse and had zero friends or family. But even then his coworkers would notice when he never returned from his Azkaban parole. So yeah. A week is too much. And Bella and Sirius would have definitely been shown on the muggle news as muggle criminals since that's what happened in PoA.
Oh well. Like I said in the beginning, the idea for this fic is a really interesting one, it's just that there were a few too many issues in the first chapter for me personally to continue reading.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Awesome chapter can't wait for more

Interesting story, and something different. Well done, looking forward to the next chapter.

Good start interesting premise, lots of potential.

I'm getting quite confused if their names keep switching between Sam and Virgo and Harry and Corvus. But the rest is nice to read.

Wow, I just randomly happened across this story when I wondered what sort of fanfics would have Harry and Bella as main characters. I am not disappointed. In fact, I am loving the story.

The characters have growth and depth. So many things have a purpose and are not happening simply because it did. I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation, waiting for future chapters.

Best wishes with your future writing.

Egnoder

"and though it was clean Harry could feel callousness as he gripped him."

callouses are rough spots on his hands from hard work
I assume you meant that, rather than emotionally callous

Harry/CorvisxGabby? :3

I need mooorreeeee...is Gabbi first year too? Will you Pair Corvis/Harry with her? What about Sirius and Bella?