| Reviews for Surrogate |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 10/30/2015 Sigeee |
 Dav009 chapter 11 . 8/17/2015 Good story write more soon |
| Savy15012 chapter 11 . 8/9/2015 I love the concept behind this story! It is something that the series has yet to touch on, and you have done an amazing job filling in the blanks with the knowledge that we do know. Although chapter 11 was a little hard to follow along with the rest of this arc. Please consider those of us who do not know where your train of thought is going. ( I am not trying to be mean, but I want to put the helpful criticism out there take it with a grain of salt your writing style is still amazing! I just am trying to help! ) Keep up the awesome work! |
| Komnenid chapter 11 . 8/9/2015 Pearl was a horrible mom back then, I wonder when is she going to try to kill steven? Garnet has to keep her eye on her |
| Purest of the Hearts chapter 2 . 7/24/2015 Did I read that right, or did it say Pearl wanted to dissect the baby?! |
| Purest of the Hearts chapter 1 . 7/24/2015 You shouldn't blame the child for being born, Pearl. |
| Primus1661 chapter 11 . 7/24/2015 When are you going to update. |
| ThisAccountIsGonzoFam chapter 1 . 7/19/2015 This is only the first chapter and I'm worked. I''mm digging it. Its cascading complex emotions rather quickly and I love how it flows. I'mma enjoy this. 10/10 |
| PrincessLyoka chapter 4 . 6/21/2015 "There's nothing dangerous about the Temple." *Amethyst promtly strides out a smoking Temple saying it's been fudged up* oh Amethyst, your timing. |
| PrincessLyoka chapter 3 . 6/21/2015 I'm inobe with your style of writing. It's just so good! Im reading the dialogue with the character's voices and they just fit perfectly! Good work! |
| PrincessLyoka chapter 2 . 6/21/2015 I'm not getting the feeling Pearl is a bit psychotic. Mewh... |
| PrincessLyoka chapter 1 . 6/21/2015 Woah, so unlike Pearl we know now. |
| Rookie-Bee chapter 11 . 5/8/2015 Fantastic! Oh man I love the flashbacks tremendously and the initial bits with Pearl slowly warming up to Steven were also wonderful. Great job. |
| naglisnatalie chapter 11 . 4/24/2015 This is the most beautiful thing I've read in a while. I absolutely love your style of writing, how you make words flow with such ease. I enjoy this backstory you've given Ruby and Sapphire and Lapis and everyone really. Keep it up, I shall be waiting for the next chapter. :D |
| Daniella Violet Moon chapter 11 . 4/18/2015 This is a beautiful and amazing thing. I love the slow development of Pearl and Steven's relationship and the visceral grief that permeates the early chapters. I really love the flashbacks and the Gem politics and seeing the very start of the rebellion. This is just fabulous. DVM |
