This story is too crowded. Too many characters that I don't care about.

Honestly both of the parent s were awful people

no no no no yes

Holy crap lots of uncapitalized I's and spacing issues. Also the whole 'I used you! No I used you first!' felt very rushed and not put together very well

The Hells your problem? Adding a Harem the size of that Bull shit the story started off on a nice place but then you just snapped

I'm trying to give this a chance but you know what this fanfiction of yours is the epitome of TRASH!

Update this story please this story has caught my interest and hoping to see the end of it

Did you really have to do that? Misunderstanding to further plot is shitty and never goes well and also why is he calling out his techniques, he got the memories of the sage of six path and his sons, he should be able to control the elements instead of having to do jutsus...

I think he should have 1 tenseigan and 1 rinnegan and when he goes all out he opens his third eye with rinnehsaringan in it

I can't find your Sharingan link anywhere can you post a link somewhere?

I would say either phoenix or fox fits best for summon
Phoenix idk why tho
Fox for his nine tails inside him

There should be more chapters to this story

K

Kishimoto garbage.

This is so painful to read