REALLY NICE! I'd love you to turn these two into a multiple chapter story because I love your writing and story telling. Subtract some of the bitterness/depression please.

I have yet to see an author write Hikaru beating Akira in title games. He's always portrayed as still being the slight under dog - enough I say! I want to see Shindo as the Honinbo.

Anyway . . . how about Ogata and Shindo a bit more personal relationship?

This...is even more heartbreaking than Ashes. The restraint of your style really brings out the rawness of Hikaru's grief, and the sly little asides, Hikaru's affectations of normalcy, highlight his heartbreak to the point where I wished I could just reach through the screen and give him a hug or something. ;_;

Eeek! This had me squealing! I loved this...and now I want a OgataHikaru pairing. Thank you! I must find that! Almost as entertaining as HikaruKoYeongha.

this is awesome and sad , but I absolutely love Ogata's pov . The last line about how Hikaru can't bring himself to share Sai even in death is so powerful , so sad .Very good job , keep it up !
lazyass out !

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I LOVE IT!;;

That was beautiful - and way too sad. *sobs*

Ah! You have anotheyr story!

I love Ogata Hikaru interaction, but I am not a big fan of this pairing (or any in this fandom, actually), so big thanks for that!

I also love Hikaru's maturity whenever Sai is involved. Poor man, dealing with his sorrow all by himself... At least he can share it with Akira now.

Great story, as always!

Beautiful.
(Brevity. Soul of wit, or whatever. So this got to be the wittiest review ever.)

I find this story really painful and beautiful. So bittersweet. It was really short (hello snippets) but the feels... Too much feels. (:

I was so happy to see a new HnG posting and it was well written but I didn't find it very enjoyable.

Absolutely brilliant story! I love the relationship between the two. I wish there were more fics like this. Great job and good luck on your exams!

Love the dynamic between those two. I can see that it can develop to OgataHikaru :) Thanks for the fic!

This was really sweet but I was hoping it would turn out to be an Ogata/Hikaru story. :P

it's a kind of sad but really nice little story and it's well written too ! Kudos to you !