nicely done, like the imagery of the lightning flashes as she sought a safe haven and then her crying out castle's name in the dark.

Very powerful story

I could so see this as being Kate's first panic attack and as in the future her calling out for castle.

Thank you

Bless her heart. Didn't she have her cell phone? If that had been me, I would've plugged it in and kept it on all night to give me a little light and music. I don't like being alone in the dark. It freaks me out.

Nice...really, truly nice! Thanks.

this is a great examination of the important phase of her recovery. you did a marvelous job describing her emotional state.

Well done.

Great job once again are you going to do a ficathon story this season I hope you do tell next time

I like the way you describe her fears and the way she finds a way out.
Thanks for sharing this precious moment with us _
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