Reviews for White Lily
Cookizilla chapter 1 . 6/18/2015
This is... practically a cliffhanger.
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Moar please. With an Ice Burner on top? * V *
Guest chapter 1 . 6/7/2015
pLEASE UPDATE THIS I LOVE YOU
AvidMind chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
You. Get more reviews. NOW!

Your writings are amazing! My favorite is Choices Across Time, and I secretly am hoping that you will finish it someday. I never liked Add that much, but this was quite different. Gotta say, I now have some kind of sympathy toward him.

The only thing I wanted to comment on this fanfic was that at times, it was awkward for me to read just the initials of the classes. I thought that the story would have flowed better if you had referred each characters by their full names. Other than this, I thought everything was perfect.

About getting more reviews, I was being serious. It's hard to come across a talented Elsword fanfic writers such as yourself. Keep up the great work!

Kudos on this wonderful fanfic!
RainSonata chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
This is beautiful. You need to write more. I want to see what happens next. How did Add get twins in the first place? Will there be an explanation for it? Little Add is too cute, I hope Diabolic Esper doesn't get too harsh with him.
unavailableeeee chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
This i amazing! I got goosebumps and almost cried. Can't wait to read more!