Funny chapter but that song was god damn horrible, being a mass effect fan since it first came out I can safely say that hearing it has lowered my opinion of the game and the universe it takes place in. Like seriously that has to be the worst piece of crap I've ever heard.

I’m always loved the story I saw an update today for the first time in a while so I thought I just read the whole thing again because it’s that good

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

I heard Darth Vader at the end of episode 3

Marauder Shield.

Marauder.

Shield.

Not Jack... or John.. or Cade... or Luke... or Steve.. or anything else.

Marauder.

Hahaha omfg lmao.

I love this already

God I absolutely hate renegade Shepard(s). I mean you don't have to write/play as a goody-two-shoes, but also don't have to write/play as an asshole. There is a middle ground that I tend to prefer, leaning a little more towards goody-two-shoes.

I love this story it’s one of the best self insert stories I’ve ever read I love the fact that your character was much more down to earth wasn’t omnipotent and a sense of how well he could orchestrate things that he did fail I look forward to going into the next story

I really hope part of the arc of your story is that your self insert adjust the personality of Shepherd because as it is right now your version of Shepherd is very unlikable but if that’s what you’re doing for so that the change is more dramatic than I get it

10 of 10 love it

So good

Love it

The best part was the end of the chapter if that’s where you’re going I actually think that’s really cool and different

10 of 10

OK I’ll like it I also like the fact that you didn’t immediately begin with three chapters about why our characters here who brought him here I’m hoping that eventually all of that comes out but I like the fact that that doesn’t begin the story that it is interwoven into it

OK I’m on board I’ll give it a shot

Good story loved it haha