I enjoyed this very much! Thanks for writing!

Brilliant!

I love Harry & Hermione together, they're so perfect for each other. I never liked Hinny and I wish JKR would have put Harmony together like she wanted at the beginning.

Ginny is better for Harry than Hermione

Children who are treated like Harry DO NOT grow up and become heroes.
Love as the power Tom knows not? Harry was hated for Ten years.
Harry has no clue what love is, Dumb old Dork saw to that!

Harry does not beat Tom because he is better, Harry is stupidly LUCKY!

Ron and Hermione? Was JKR thinking or drinking?
Someone find out what she imbibed and outlaw it.
We don't need more brain dead people.

Thanks for writing.

I really liked the ease of reading this story.
Dumby is a damn and Voldy just one more victim here (or so I think)
The truth makes me happy the life they had later.
Kira

Woaw

What Happened After That And Please Update The Story Soon I Like The So Much Please.

Why would Harry feel foolish? The girl he loved didn't give a damn to write to him the hole fucking summer. He has every right to feel upset.

Then again, most of your fics follow the same pattern. You always write Harry as being desperately in love with Hermione, to the point where he will either

A) Immeditely forgive Hermione of whatever stupidity or betrayal she did
B) Immediately forgive Hermione for hurting him
C) Immediately accept Hermioe back like some lovesick
D) Wait for Hermione to love him back, even if it takes years.

There are much more, but the gist of it is you want Harry to be a brow beaten, hen picked stuttering wimp around Hermione.

Your husband fucks other women in your bed. Of course he doesn't give one shit about a cunt like you who vents all of infidelities and sins onto fics, in some sick attempt to placate your guilt by having a protagonist he rugsweeps all of his lover's sins and unconditionally loves and forgives her like its nothing.

Fuck you, broomstick fucker.

This seemed more like a summary or outline then a true fleshed out story.
I also don’t see how dumbledor could be surprised or hurt at the accusation of being dark. There is no way he doesnt know he is evil with all he has willingly done and hidden.

A beautiful story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

did they do nothing with the Ravenclaw seat...

I’ve read this one before, but I must have been before I made an account and reviewed as a guest. The storyline was entertaining, I especially liked the way in which Voldemort and all his horcruxes were destroyed without the big battle. Most of it was written as if it were a synopsis rather than a detailed story, but that’s alright, just not the style of story I want to read all the time.

HP as it should be written. Ever thankful.

very good read to pass a bit of time well written