| Reviews for His Own Man |
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   dreamdemon 97 chapter 13 . 9/7 more please! |
| Raymondjay41 chapter 13 . 8/8 This is a fantastic story , hopefully you or someone else will finish it! |
| Vttir Bjorn chapter 13 . 8/3 Tomorrow it will have been five years bitch, yet to it! |
| Jimbocous chapter 13 . 7/9 Good start. Really wish this had continued. |
| ijen524 chapter 13 . 6/21 wish you'd finished this story... it was very interesting |
| jaqmaq77 chapter 10 . 6/17 He and his two brothers had BOTH inherited? What? BOTH of the THREE of them got powers?... Okay, My four kids, yes, all five of them like this story... but I have to admit... not one of them noticed that little slip even after I pointed it out twice... |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/7 I like this series. But I don't like when Harry is respectful to the girls and their part of the sosiaty, they simply call him Potter or Harry and ignore that he is now Lord and Heir. And it feels so wrong very mutch so from Greengrass stand I society |
| Colbycolt chapter 13 . 5/3 Interesting story, shame it didn’t continue |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/10 Harry ain’t aware that snape was a death eater it’s like everyone forgets these details. |
| Spidersauce chapter 9 . 4/7 House Potter owes her knights nothing. The previous three years made abundantly clear that Harry didn't even know there was a House Potter. Those sworn families should have assisted in thateven if only anonymously mailing a book on wizarding heritage. Your Harry is far too quick to debase himself whenever he talks to a female. He's quite a pussy. |
| Spidersauce chapter 9 . 4/7 Ran into two people in ine week? Just how incompetent is he? |
| Spidersauce chapter 8 . 4/7 Harry blushes far too easily for someone who spent an entire summer with Sirius. Bright crimson face every 30 seconds? Not possible. |
| Spidersauce chapter 5 . 4/6 So Harry won't show up for his date with Daphne. Rip |
| Spidersauce chapter 3 . 4/6 So lost in his thoughts he ran right into someone. What a cliché. Also, what a dumbass. |
| Khatix chapter 3 . 10/4/2019 Magical Britain was seen that way in canon because JKR screwed up, it was a story about a civil war or terrorist organization lead by a man who was proclaimed worse than Grienwald who waged war across the Europe in WW2 and she didn't expand till it was to late. Her main problem was she kept adding new magics without seeing how it effects what she published. Perfect example, the Stone in book 1 could of been hidden under Fidelius Charm which was shown in book 3, so now it shows a manipulative Dumbledore who purposely put a school full of kids at risk to bait Voldermort. Honestly if you ignore book 6 and 7 with Harry killing Voldermort at the MoM at end of book 5 the story was good. No Deus Ex Machina soul containers or super artifacts, i mean hell the fight between Voldermort and Dumbledore in book 5 was more profound than the fight between Harry and Voldermort at book 7 magical skill wise. |
