I've read your four longest FMA stories and I love them all. Your style is enjoyable and the pace is just right, I don't find myself wanting to skip over paragraphs of pointless descriptions or entire scenes. Your OCs are surprisingly likeable and your non-original characters mostly act like they would in the manga/anime. Your Riza and Al are spot on, but you tend to sometimes write Ed more mature than he actually is. He reminds me more of his version at the end of FMA03 than his early FMA:B. No big deal though, just wanted to point it out. Your stories are well thought out and interesting, and best of all is that you don’t break the in-universe rules.

I have a character who lost her vocal chords as well! (Her story needs some major rewriting, please PLEASE don't read it or I'll cry. My other, non-taboo-performing character, however, is great.) This is great, you don't usually see sibling characters that are well-written. It makes me actually want to keep reading instead of run away in disgust! You have no idea what an accomplishment that is. K well I just hopped out of the shower, but Ima read later! Ciao darling!

I love this so much

I'm really liking this story omgggg

Eiryn's unique "toll" and the mental trauma she suffered from the human transmutation really make her unique and different from other fanfictions with plotlines similar to this one!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it!
Hope you write more soon!

Please, please, please continue this!

Looks cute! Will Ryn learn sign language?