Wondering if you plan on incuding in character sideplots?
I.E: Dorians problems with his father, Josephines problems with her family.

Well this isnt a story for me because you gave him a rinnegan.

I actually really enjoyed the humor and hope you update this and all of your stories soon

Personally, I have no clue why everyone gave you such a hard time. I found the humor acceptable. I'll say a couple of parts seemed to not fit the narrative all the way but that's to be expected. I do have a slight disagreeance with having Naruto mainly hang with Sera over the course of different chapters. But that's just the inner me that doesn't really feel for Sera. Personally, she's not exactly top on my list of characters. But I didn't really mind it beyond that. Kinda wish we got a few more private moments between the two Inquisitors. Some kind of dialog about them being a thing. Don't get me wrong, humor is cool and all...but I'm personally a romance kind of guy. Feed me the lovey dovey shit. Anyway, that's all I had to say. Good day.

...He couldn't even beat a Pride Demon? ...Bullshit!

Okay, cool, but...why take away Naruto's healing factor?

HELL YEAH!

I wanted to see naruto show him god...

the chapters dosent seem to connect to each other
very well. and its little bit hard to follow

the last few chapters havent made much sense

skipped quite a lot

this is stupid. rasenshuriken didint do anything to it.
nerf

varrics here as well good

where is Varric

this is good but a mess