OHMY. DID I ACTUALLY GET THE PLEASURE OF BEING REPLIED. AW. YIS.

No Moises, but heyy that's perfectly okay (I never expected him to appear EVERY chap anyway, I'll just be content with what I've got :O) and Helena was enough to take my mind off him. She's such a cool little character, and yay for more backstory! (is it just me or are they related to Steven Stone ohmy)

Alexander surprised me on so many levels. So old, and so rude. Are trainers like him even allowed to participate? :3 But yay we got to see Adam battle so yeah that's one good thing that came out of this.

League of Heroes deffo sounds interesting. I've got an academy story as well- albeit it's on hiatus now- and maybe we could discuss this?

Enjoyed this chapter overall, great job!

May I suggest either Jade or Onyx by Amy47101 they are great characters! I believe that they would do nicely! :) Anyways I absolutely have a love-hate relationship with this story because I kept reading these awesome chapters and then came to this... end... wahh! Lol I'm just joking with you. Good luck/

This story is just filled with potential.

The characters are interesting, each one being able to stand out in an identifiable way. You've made the interactions between them believable, and I'm not great with grammar so as far as I'm concerned that was fine too. I like the aspect you've put into it with the Elites not really staying in their chamber until a challenger is defeated like I expected, but instead are paged to go when their turn arrives, giving them the option to watch the battles and gauge and better test their soon-to-be opponents. The Elites do act like a family in my experience, they may work together, but they are just so close that its hard to imagine any of them ever falling out.

The idea of this OC collaboration story is interesting. Not only does it make a great story in its own right, but if done well enough may even get some of the authors involved to have a smaller collaboration again in the instance of two characters becoming close friends or such. While I can't say I don't have an interest in joining in on this project, my only OC story currently applicable, least under the guise of being an academy story, hasn't been progressed too far. I do have another story that is OC with enough usable OC's to allow you to pick one. That one being my World Of Pokemon Story. There may not be a school involved but I figure a traveling trainer could just as easily stumble upon your story.

Anyway, great story! Keep up the good work!

Oh amazing! A new chapter! I had hoped this story hadn't died.
Alexander was quite an interesting character for a Pokrmon story. But Adam is too perfect right now, imo.
Hoping to see when the real conflict starts soon!

Great chapter! Alexander is kind of a real pain in the ass, but hey, who cares. It's still great to read! Good luck with the rest of your stuff, and keep up the good work!

I really liked this chapter. I wish that Kaleo had gotten to destroy that homophobe with her own hands but ph well. At least someone got to.

The one error I noticed was that in the last paragraph you said he had a ground type that let him beat Euridice.

And I don't really have any suggestions for LoH, since I can't think of any worlds that would fit it. I'll most likely read the story, though.

Next chapter I hope we see the rest of the Elite Four again (I may be biased towards Euridice, but I really love all of them).

Apologies in advance for my bad spelling/grammar. Reviewing on mobile is true hell.

When you said you'll keep more Moises scenes coming I could've died of happiness. :D Best Elite Four ever!

Buut, Euridice is heading to that spot too! I like her babbling and her messy-ness and all her quirks. It's all really cool.

I like how you've got the Elite Four portrayed- a tight close group of members, who all rely on each other. Then you've got them all eating out together and watching soccer games, it's just, awesome. You've brought out a whole new side of the Elite Four, something that has never been seen before. And you did it excellently.

Great battling scenes- long, but not too drawn out. Very fast, and action-paced. Just how I like it.

And that cliffhanger? Excecuted perfectly.

Can't wait for more!

Euridice is so in character it's scary. I really do hope that we learn more about her book later, because it actually sounds really really interesting.

The battle was really good. It was really long, too-I usually make my battle scenes too short, but yours took up space without seeming drawn out.

I also loved the scene at the Pansear Pot. I don't know why, but I found the story about the guy with the bratty daughter really hilarious.

The one thing I noticed is that it should be 'get past', not 'get passed'. Other than that, everything was good.

Aaahhhh the puns are killing meee...

Great job, and I really do wonder who the silver-haired woman is. Euridice is kinda... um... interesting, for the most part. And I think Conway was a really good kid. Great job, so keep it up!

Yay, a Christmastime update of a favorite story. I'm glad we've now met every Elite Four member now. Tony seems super cool and Euridice very odd. Moises is still great and I love how you wrote them at the Pansear Pot scene, it was really nice. All the names of the drinks and sports teams were a good addition.
Can't wait for Team Quasar and the big problems to start

Cool! WHen are we gonna meet the 4th elite four member?

Another great chapter as always Legacy, the words flow nicely together. And I can't wait to see more of the plotline.

Ohohohoho... Looks things are about to get dicey.. Can't wait to see some Team Quasar!

Okay, first I shall state how great the awesome-ness of Moises is. Best Elite Four ever!
Kaleo seems cool, she reminds me a lot about myself, hehe :3
The chemistry and banter between all the Elite Four is really interesting. I can't get enough of it!

Moises's battle was great! Yin seems like a really interesting guy, and can't wait to see the next battle.

Adam and Nurse Joy... for some reason, it reminds me of Norman... who, coincidentally, is also a Normal-type specialist!

Good! Yin seemed like a bit of a jerk, so I'm glad Moises won. Excited to see the next challenger!

hmm. . . good job with kaleo i think you managed to capture her spot on to how i imagined her.

can't wait to see the next few chapters!