| Reviews for Coming To the NYC |
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  Guest chapter 10 . 2/11/2018 Your paragraph is messed up but please update soon. I would like to see how you write Joshaya now that you are a little older. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/20/2015 Lucas finally gets to date his crush Savannah Lux Bailey Montana . before he left and he moved to NYC . after his older sister Taylor travel back in time in a machine and hack into Lucas old school 's ex boyfriend Derk as known as Derk the jerk or jerky Derk .When he go to college. |
| Danisha chapter 8 . 6/14/2015 I absolutely loved it all the character's have specific attitudes and characteristics that make them unique and this helps bring them out! I especially like the fact of mya and Joshua being together in I think they were meant for each other and are all grown up now! Sincerely Danisha |
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/31/2015 Update |
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/24/2015 Whoa there baby said Lacey to Lucas . I am going to my diary before joey does and reads. come on lace I am your closest friend you have who is here now said Josh. I am your boyfriend I would read your diary. Yeah youre right even though it just a diary with secert and lock code key and with charm bracelEg. And my parents Give that since I stArt gr 7. |
 megan.dempsey.71697 chapter 8 . 3/8/2015 please update soon |
| hinnyjoanne100 chapter 8 . 2/23/2015 when is a new chapter coming out. btw i love this story! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/31/2015 LOVE this update soon |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/31/2015 LOVE UPDATE SOON |
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/29/2015 update plzzzz |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/5/2015 Love it update soon |
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/5/2015 Update LOVE it |
| ThatEmoChick666 chapter 7 . 1/7/2015 It's so funny I love it! |
| Bethany Tucker chapter 7 . 1/5/2015 Cute! Lol this is way funny! :) |
| TheOneWhoRisesUp chapter 7 . 1/5/2015 teeeehhheeeeeheeee...Riley! Such a DIRTY mind...;) |
