| Reviews for Mutable Medley |
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Saphira113 chapter 60 . 6/12 Oh my god. That was tooth rottingly sweet! But you did a great job with the writing, I genuinely thought that they were on a first date until they stepped into the house and Yuzu spoke. |
Saphira113 chapter 59 . 6/12 I love Rukia's laughter! It signifies a strong, healthy relationship. Your idea is hilarious, if I was Ichigo's friends I would be laughing at him too. I love the sparkly unicorn, what a perfect prize! |
Saphira113 chapter 58 . 6/12 Well when you put it like that, I'm forced to see the IchiRuki pairing in canon. Although I genuinely feel RukiaxRenji more reading all of your drabbles has opened up my mind more. |
Saphira113 chapter 57 . 6/12 I concur with Rukia, sadly it is possible to sprain ones ankle while just lazing around ones own apartment. |
Saphira113 chapter 56 . 6/12 What do you imagine Ichigo's relationship to Kaien to be in the story? Is he his nephew like in canon? Also how Rukia ever meet Shiba Kaien? It seems odd for her to have caught a glimpse of him before. I think the way you've written them makes sense though. Of course Rukia would follow her duty, and work for the betterment of her clan. And of course Ichigo would have gotten a glimpse of her and only then decided to marry her. |
Saphira113 chapter 55 . 6/12 I suppose that Rukia as a shinigami could be a guardian angle but I think in the canon conception the average shinigami feels no such strong positive emotions or drive to protect live humans. I love the idea that someone's guardian angle could just be chilling in the flat next door to them though. |
Saphira113 chapter 54 . 6/11 So fluffy! Ichigo will always protect his family with everything he has. I feel like a very pregnant Rukia would look hilarious, almost like a kiwi bird. |
Saphira113 chapter 53 . 6/9 Rukia does have one of the most beautiful zanpakuto in Soul Society! Still, it's probably not a good thing to unintentionally harm your allies with its side effects. |
Saphira113 chapter 52 . 6/8 Hahaha yes, there was definitely no final chapter. Rukia does seem in danger of burning out, but also of getting stuck in a years long rut. The way that seems so easy in Soul Society. |
Saphira113 chapter 51 . 6/8 Having to wake up ridiculously early to cram onto a bus is one of life's tortures. I don't blame Ichigo's teammates for being asleep on their feet. |
Saphira113 chapter 49 . 6/8 There is so much more emotion in your chapter here than I felt from Ichigo in the manga, perhaps because you are able to write more from his point of view. Your writing really brings home his desperation and determination to protect his family. |
Saphira113 chapter 48 . 6/8 It sounds like Ichigo has a crush! That's super nice of him to give Rukia ice cream on the house though. |
Saphira113 chapter 47 . 6/7 What is Hisana and Rukia's relationship in this AU? Are they sisters or sisters-in-law? Based on some clues in the story I think that they are sisters (because Rukia cares so much about what she wants) and they are doing something that Hisana herself didn't get. I assume her marriage to Byakuya was a smaller, more hasty affair? |
Saphira113 chapter 45 . 6/7 Aww a meet cute with a dog! Is Rukia Ichigo's neighbor? |
Saphira113 chapter 44 . 6/7 Well that's a convenient excuse to go find him again :) I hope that Rukia is able to return the flashlight. Who could Ichigo's EMT partner be? I think that Ishida would also go into the medical profession but I think it's more likely for him to become a surgeon or something than an EMT. Chad could be an EMT but he seems like he would want a quieter life. |