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Bloody Phantom chapter 40 . 8/1 The one downside to the story is the cure. Really? Hermione gets bitten and within a year finds the part of the cure to the uncurable? No negative side effects. I had hoped there would at least be a negative side effect. Hermione told Snape when she first began that she didn't expect to find a cure, just a way to physically suppress the wolf like the wolfsbane suppress the mind of the wolf. So, I was really hoping she'll either find it's not possible or, at least, find that suppressing the wolf causes some health issues that makes it dangerous to drink the potion to suppress the wolf every single month. I mean, it sounds like there would be some issues with stopping your body's need to shift and change. It sounds like it would hurt just as much as letting your body to shift. At least say they can use the potion a few mouths, but then they need to change, just to release some of the tension in their body. It was that hope that kept me reading, until chapter 34. I had to jump to the last chapter to see if there was any side effects and found none. Yeah, at least it's not a cure cure, one drink and all cured...that would be a whole lot worst. So, thank you for not doing that! If I had to choose between that and what you came up with, I would pick yours. Other than that, I really liked Hermione and Remus development. He kept his morals and waited until she graduated and, even then, struggled with their relationship for while, that was very much his character. I liked the friendship Hermione struck with Snape and Draco. Hermione's determination was very on point as well. Sorry, I'm not on my computer, so I'm not automatically logged on to my account. |
SolusIpse42 chapter 31 . 6/20 Yep. Harry was great here |
Oceans-blue chapter 40 . 6/19 Hi! I absolutely love Remus's character since the first moment I came across him. I've read nearly every story about him that I've found in fanfiction, archiveofourown, and wattpad; let me tell you this is if not the best, one of the best ones I've read. I ABSOLUTELY love it. I really, really do. Huge thanks for sharing the storie with us, I'm going to look at your profile now to see if you've written something else. Congrats and lots of love! |
PaleandBroodingsGirl chapter 40 . 2/10 Wonderful story and ending—and epilogue! It was perfect for the story! |
PaleandBroodingsGirl chapter 30 . 2/10 I can’t believe you were in high school when you wrote this! It’s so good! Do nature! |
PaleandBroodingsGirl chapter 21 . 2/9 I’m so glad that you didn’t have them jumping right into bed in ch 1! This is way more realistic! |
alaeserroukh0 chapter 40 . 2/7 Me ha encantado, simplemente fantástico, gracias :) Att: A.S |
Beauty Eclipsed chapter 40 . 12/22/2019 Loved the plot! |
riversgirl75 chapter 31 . 11/15/2019 This reminds me of Harry’s outburst in Deathly Hallows when Remus runs away from rinks when she’s pregnant. It’s a perfect scene that shows Harry’s loyalty, determination, and love for a friend. I’m assuming you mirrored that on purpose, but even if you didn’t, it shows a side to Harry we need. |
riversgirl75 chapter 30 . 11/15/2019 I need to respond to your author’s note: YOU FINISHED HIGH SCHOOL?! This story reads so well it’s impossible to believe a teenager wrote it! Your descriptions and characterizations are authentic and thorough. I’m beyond impressed’ |
MacaMcfly chapter 1 . 9/24/2019 I absolutely loved this story! The way their relationship grew and how well portrayed each character was. I specially loved Snape, some of his lines cracked me up every time. Awesome job! |
galassialuna chapter 40 . 9/8/2019 Oh my GAWD. I loved this SO MUCH! This was an amazing piece and I absolutely love how it turned out. I binge read this in 2 1/2 hours and blame you entirely for my sleep deprivation :P (SO WORTH IT!) Definitely putting this on my favourites list and will probably end up reading this again because it was seriously that good. It’s so rare now days to find a really well written story with a decent plot line and you did wonderfully. Now I’m off to stalk the rest of your stories... much love! Xoxo |
Peque Saltamontes chapter 1 . 8/17/2019 I just finished reading this a couple of days ago. I had read your fanfic Of Weddings and Warfare way back, when you had just finished writing it, and didn't notice you had finished this one at last. I really liked it. Please do not forget about this pairing, I would read anything you write for them. (Aaaand any other ships that include Hermione, but RemusxHermione is my weakness). Greetings from Paraguay, sweetie! |
Arodain chapter 40 . 5/22/2019 Thank you for posting this story! I recently got interested in this pairing, and Lupin has always been one of my favorite characters in the books (i was devastated that he died in canon). You write really well, conversations flow naturally, and the narrative parts are quite descriptive without being too dragging. I must admit that I found it weird with Hermione having to always chase after Lupin especially at the start, but knowing Lupin's character he probably would never have made the first move and Hermione's persistence is exactly what he needed. I am glad things got resolved for them in the end and Lupin finally got the happiness he deserved. Well done! |
Loveforwolves143 chapter 40 . 4/14/2019 This is such a great story. I loved how Hermione and Remus' relationship grew. I can't wait to see what will be in store for them down the road. |