Huh so is this the OG professor Arc

i hope u do more chapters it is a good story, i especially liked the interactions between blake and jaune as i for one like the knightshade ship but as this isnt a knightshade fic it is cool to see bits and pieces in there, all in all good story, hope u continue

I'm kinda sad that this won't continue this story is a diamond in the rough. Great job on the story I'm hoping you would continue.

I would say a bit rushed I would think that jaune and Blake are good but put in a story about how ozpin dated goodwitch or something like that but other than that I loved it

It's a bummer this was cancelled. The possibilities of your world were great.

Oh wow. This was amazing. The way you pulled off the backstory of Jaune... just brilliant. I think that I'm going to have to go through and take notes on some of this stuff for a fic idea I had. Thanks for the amazing story!

Awww...kinda sad this work isn't going to be updated anymore. I really enjoyed the story and concept, and I felt immersed in the world ypu had made. I'll be sure to check out the other story you're going to be working on.

wow, im looking forward for your next work. tbh i kinda prefer a lighter world. but i trust you would do lancaster justice :D

That makes sense; just another reason to look forward to season 3

Cool mate, that sounds like it woulda been sweet. My brother has a friend names Rex, and he is like one of the funniest guy's i've ever met.

I think this is pretty cool mate, but i noticed some errors and stuff. Mixed up or missing letters mostly, but ya got everyone's names right! thats good, people usually mess up Jaune or Pyrrha if they mess up the letters, so at least those ones are all right

Well, not the first time I have seen/read a mature Jaune Arc, but it would be nice to see his character development from canon goofy self to this world weary one.

Interesting story, but I skipped your latest chapter with the summary as that's a hell of a lot of spoilers for your own story. Really kills the mystery and ruins your chance to explain it as part of the story when you give us basically a bullet-ed list. Anyway enjoy the pacing and attention to detail as well as character interaction. Looking forward to more.

imo i felt more emotionally attached to this fic than any other rwby fic, its so... sad

It's a shame that you're ending this story, but I do appreciate you putting your thoughts of your future intent in the end. It gives it a bit of closure which is well deserved.

As far as 'Jaune is a badass' AU's go, this was among the better of them- less about an overpowered semblance meant to steal the show (using his already-established aura to buff his tank style, rather than be a one-man army), more about more credible developments you slowly revealed (Jaune already being a graduated student and a Hunter). There's no real issue with Jaune being impressive when he's older, so moving the timeline around is perfectly fine for solid AU fodder. The fact that there was a backstory that was allowing development parallel to the current-time plot was icing on the cake.

But I will say, I liked Josephine the best. OC's are tricky, but you had a balanced one here: a mixture of strengths and weaknesses, she did a good job in being a foil for the existing characters (Jaune himself) without threatening to dominate the plot. That she also came from a credible, canonical source that Jaune had reason to care about (Jaune's vague sisters) also made the relationship more believable, rather than invented. Josephine worked well as a character friction for Jaune to work through, and was both enjoyable and pleasant to read.

Overall an enjoyable piece, even if sadly ended short. Best of luck for your future works.