Una porqueria sin orden ni sentido,aunque tenia tanto potencial echado por la borda...

Lmao. That would be the trolliest ending, just to die because a prank after all that effort.

sorry for your loss, don't over work your self try to get out of the house as much as possible. hang out with friends and family if neither then just go to the park or go do something. But, I also love the sith reborn I hope you dated soon its a great store

Reading this, I feel like I'm reading a story written by a person who is slowly slipping into dementia or senility. It's just gotten worse and worse. Definitely won't be subscribing or following. Angry I wasted my time on this story.

A third of this chapter devoted to reviews and notes (skipped through them, but looks like the same notes from last chapter). Last chapter had that plus a huge section of useless info I don't care about regarding some stupid warrior class or something. And you keep going on and on about how people are dressed and all kinds of other useless information that doesn't enhance the story in any way.

I'm liking this story less and less.

This battle is dragging on. You're getting bogged down and the plot has ground to a halt.

"a large serpent like creature. The creature was 39 meters (127 feet) long and 50 meters (164 feet) tall" - That makes no sense. How could something that's taller than it is long be considered a "serpent like creature"? Serpents are MANY MANY MANY times longer than they are tall.

"his ship shook violently mostly from being hit by a proton torpedo" A proton torpedo wouldn't cause a 25km long ship to shake. It wouldn't be felt at all.

HK-47 was present during Naruto's training, which included Chakra training. Why is he acting like he's never heard of Chakra before?

Holy cow. That's a lot of HK's. I almost feel bad for Naruto.

THANKS FOR BRINGING IN HK-51! BEST BOT EVER!

I loved the story and it is worth reading
So continue to write as I will continue to read it

Srry for your loss...I do hope you update this as well though.

as far as I know, the HK-51 series of droids never used the term "meat bag". instead, they said "organics". it was HK-47 that was always saying "meat bag". of course, this is only what I've learned from playing both KOTOR games. I may be wrong, but that's all I've got for you

Hope your going to be alrivht. i know how it is to lose someone. and thats good to hear your back.