| Reviews for One Who Shapes The Future |
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Logan B chapter 4 . 7/31 Nice touch with Devils me cry my friend but can I recommend that if you wanna make another one have Naruto use both |
Velin63 chapter 1 . 11/13/2019 the human body only has about 1.5 gallons of blood |
Koshiro Unohana chapter 1 . 10/3/2019 Shunshin is a D rank jutsu. Also, it is high speed movement not teleportation. |
FLEA23 chapter 4 . 10/3/2019 srry bro naruhina is just to precious do you really wanna see a sad hina |
Fanficlover2017 chapter 9 . 7/18/2019 You need to continue this story! |
TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 5/24/2019 It's a good thing these are discontinued because we don't need more Kishimoto loving trash around. |
kevkills777 chapter 9 . 5/10/2019 Damn I just seen this shit on Reddit I guess it is true SMH just go |
fluttershywinde chapter 8 . 3/25/2019 Pity this epic story need got continued |
Guest chapter 8 . 1/4/2019 Update |
Gust chapter 8 . 8/4/2018 Please continued the storylines |
Arsenal chapter 3 . 8/2/2018 I'm over and done with this fic. That OC Uchiha was awful. Contrived pairing. Naruto was divulging info willy-nilly. Stupid. |
Arsenal chapter 1 . 8/2/2018 First chapter in and it's already a fail. Next time you write a fic try and plan better. Don't just write whatever comes to you. Weigh the consequences. For example: it was too early to reveal to the hokage naruto's knowledge of kurama. It should have been hidden so that later he could negotiate something in a position of strength. |
Ben chapter 1 . 7/19/2018 5 |
hubnnick chapter 1 . 6/15/2018 5 all three of them |
Meito Uchiha chapter 1 . 6/7/2018 good story, at least you kept Kurama's history the same unlike some stories I Read. |