I wonder who the Irish and Scottish are in the Pokemon world? I'm an Irish/Scottish American with a bit of German so I wonder where in the Pokemon world I fit in. It's sad that Luna lost her mum at a young age. I can relate having lost my mom to cancer when I was 12.

I feel bad for Remus here and Sirius mentioning the dining room is what set him off. Never mention anything related to food when someone is dry heaving. Kinda funny reading it but experiencing it not so much. I wonder if this is the Jasmine that runs the Steel type gym

i found the theme song scene great. Had a big dumb smile on my face :D
Great first showing with Gary and the classic blastoise vs charizard. Was kinda rooting for Blastoise to megaevolve too.
Finishing with a question didn't Moly or someone in the first part of this series say that Charlie didn't become headboy but almost did or was it reverse, he did but almost not.

Fun chapter. We don't see enough HP fic were Harry interacts with the press in a fun way, which i find a shame. I also love your version of Gary, have kinda looked forward to him in this story, and was excited when he first showed up. I also like that you have Wally in the story, wasn't sure at first if he was who i thought before this chapter.
And were going to see the headmaster in action i'm really excited for that, especially Dumbledore.
And Xeno with the foreshadowing? that is the thing about this story it is mixed in way between the universes that you can't be sure which direction it is going all the time, which is great.

This is a question i have wanted to ask not just you but other Who have written pokemon fanfiction.

What is up with having to include mstyc arts in your stores. It is pokemon they are Wonderful and mysterious on their own, there really isn't Any need to include it, it is interesting without already. Some of it is sort of interesting and can go some way to translate harry verse to pokeverse.

The speaking also take something away from the special unspoken Bond between man and pokemon. There are some great stores out there where harry can talk with Hedwig and just knows what she is answering without us hearing it and those are great. it add something mystierious to the story and you had that in the first books. then sort of went in another direction and had Them talk, which seems wrong. And now your going into turning into legendaries teori and again that seems wrong. The legendaries have always been kind of godlike and outside our understanding, so talking about how they where made is taking away from that.

And like previous to much human fighting not enough pokemon fighting.

Too much bashing in this chapter making Avalon look bad, and Johto like the only decent good People. Despite them acting like animals, saluting like their students is part of an army or the hitler youth party, and taking a whinny brat like Draco too serious. It is All a little pretentious and way to much focus on Johto and your OC. You should think about putting up an oc warning on your stores cuz alot of People are absolutely gonna gate those parts... Which is a shame for it really is quite good when it focuses on Avalon and Harry. It is interesting and there are some absolutely great ideas there should just be more focus on them and a little more spread out amongst the other regions when you want them involved.
And the "oh their senses are dulled to the mystique arts"... Of course they are, aren't they supposed to be rare. You have also made it seems like region usually only have one type of art; Avalon withe pokemagnus, Johto with speaking and Kalos with veela. Why should they know everything about arts they aren't sharing knowledge about, makes them seem ignorent when they glare at McGonagall for not knowing everything about veelas.

You also focuses to much on the wars, and hand-to-hand fighting... Where is the pokemon in All this, thoughts it was a harry/pokemon not harry/scottish History. Which again is a shame for it is really interesting otherwise, should just focus a little more on established characters and pokemons.

Sorry if seemed like a rant, i just really like some parts of your stores.

I like your story, but it focuses a little too much on your Gary stue OC, that war and such instead of Harry the actual main character.
You've also made the Kanto cartoonishly evil and incompetent. Could probably be saved if we soon see some stuff from the Kanto side but still.

Im loving the Kenways, especially Jack. With how much build up you've given them it's felt like they've always been around and feels strange to think they weren't. Also loving Barty Crouch allowing me to imagine The Doctor at Pokemon Hogwarts, sure hope he doesn't turn out to be evil but Im thinking he won't seeing how you tried to lead us to believe he would in an A/N

y am i having so many assassin's creed flashbacks reading about the sons of johto and the kenways

Are you going to kill off jack, and have jasmine take his place as the promise? Because that would be a sad chapter.

Go Neville! Voldemort better watch out.

Great chapter. A little bit of fluff, some good advice, and just enough humor to keep it interesting.

This chapter is awesome. I like how it shows that a slap on the hand doesn’t work. Jack tells it how it is, and how it should be.

Is Voldemort based on cell?
I feel like I’m watching or reading lord of the rings: the return of the king. Or avengers 1 and end game. This chapter is awesome.

I honestly thought you were going to kill jasmine like Rowling killed Cedric. Really glad you didn’t. Great chapter.