Please, please write more soon I love the beginning did you get your ideas for. Arrow? How did Harry survive please continue great suspenseful start.

A good chapter

As I got to the end of this chapter, I wondered if The Bow was Harry. A good beginning to the story! I'm curious to see where this story goes. Please keep writing! I look forward to seeing what happens next. Thank you!

It is rushed, both this chapter and more so on the 1st...It is also lacking details. That being said, I see the potential for the story to evolve and you to advance as writer and storyteller (not the same thing), so I will be following your story.

Thanks

good story really enjoying esp since he wont be paired with ginny or hermionwe thank god

Darn was so hoping she would die

Okay, that was a rather interesting story you've made, and it was quite identical to the story that I was thinking. You got my attention on about the title, I'm wondering right now who's the Bow. Is he a OC or a character from another series? Now, to the contents of the story. There are some problems with the story that is bugging me.

First, Ron, Hermione and Ginny would never, ever betray Harry, especially Hermione. (Okay, maybe Ron could betray him for some reason) I'm quite surprised that you wrote in the story was, "The three were excited to see the kiss first-hand." I think that if you had posted a few chapters about this and have given reasons throughout the story for the three of them to be excited to see the Dementor's Kiss. But since you didn't, it's kinda weird reading that line. I also think you rushed it. Nothing comes out good when it's rushed.

This story has a lot of potential to be a great story, it just needs more time to think. I suggest that you take the separated parts of the story and start elaborating the events more so the readers can get a better grasp of what's happening, what you basically did here was that you instantly threw us near the climax of the story, if that wasn't the climax.

You kinda remind me of myself when I was new. I did a pretty bad HP fic where Ron dies and Hermione suddenly gets over it in a matter of minutes and gets into a relationship with Harry. I'm not ashamed to say that it was rather crappy.

I hope I see this fic become a lot better than it is now, maybe you should change the story a little. Have Hermione try and save Harry from his fate, and then maybe it could lead to a pairing between the two as the story goes on. Good luck.

I have to assume that this is a joke.

what the hell did i just read...

Not bad