Oh, I really feel for the Doctor. Talk about the no good answers scenario.
I hope you update soon.

Interesting. I shudder to think of Missy In charge of Gallifrey.

I really like this concept. Looking forward to more.

Excellent start. Historically the Doctor usually gets very cold receptions on Gallifrey and this could be bad.
Hope you update soon.

Oh man, looks like the Doctor is in a bit of trouble! I'm also a sucker for hurt/injured Twelve. He seems to be more vulnerable. Great descriptions as well. I love that in a story.

I really like your style of writing. Very descriptive and detailed. Keep it up!

Very good! :)

Please update soon! I'm loving this story :)