yes this has so much potential I like bad ass Ron. rizukun !

Great but will u continue?

Great so far can't wait for the next chapter.

Keep updating I hope he gets the 99 million royalty check from his Naco creation

I realy liked it please follow it up with a good story.

Awesome. Can't wait for more.

Good start, the prologue was well written, grammar was used and the setting for your story has been set perfectly. I'm actually very interested with what kind of story you have imagined. Good luck and clear thinking.

I always wanted Ron mystic martial arts master, Drakken's super genius brains-Zorpox, and ring tower of muscles

...hm, need to see more for a better opinion

It was good. I would like to see more. It did read a little stiff kinda like instructions.

The writing at least is gramatically and punctuationally good, the story leaves a lot to be desired. Uber-Ron stories usually fall flat cause he becomes a ubermench and frankly he needs the foibles as Disney presented him with to be actually Ron. Try again when you have a better concept of who Ron Stoppable really is. You don't with this attempt at all.