all I think of is the Hulk at the big green rage monster pff, bet Raph would like the guy actually

i liked this version better when i saw the episode I was all uhh, okay how is this suppose to be a nightmare and Mikeys was also pretty tame compaired to his brothers in the real episode honestly The Creep episode also had a potential darker plot that could have been added im glad i stumbled upon this fic its amazing i feel the show sometimes lacked some emotinal deph especially with Mikey how his brothers want yo keep him innocent even in the show hes the only one who still keeps smiling if he ever did change like his brothers wanted it would probably be a situation of "don't know what you have until its gone"

I know what you mean, I too thought this episode lacks in character depth big time. I especially hated Raphs dream because it made just no sense to me...
Your interpretation is much, much better! And somehow I really don't think Mikeys dream was easier on him than the others... feeling totally alone and hopeless... I think it would be so hard on someone like him.
So, I just wanted to say that I liked the story very much! Thanks for writing and sharing :)

THAT MAKES PERFECT SENSE! MY BIRTHDAY IS THE SAME DAY I WAS BORN!

REALLY?! WHYYYYYYYYYY?! WHY'D I HAVE TO EAT THE LAST PICKLE WHEN I WAS SAVING IT!?

Hmm i preferred the Donnie almost dying part in the show but besides that the stories awesome.

Poor Leo! Not only his brothers telling him he's a bad leader, but Master Splinter too! And that he was responsible for Karai's mutation... This hurt.
(In that episode, where Karai mutates, Leo said in the end that it was his fault, and Spinter didn't correct him... Wonder if they will make something more out of that. HOPE they will)

This story was so beautiful, so deep. I love how you showed all there different fears, and showed how Donnie, Leo, and Raph cared about Mikey's innocence. Of all the fears, I believe my fear is most similar to Donnie's. This is an amazing story!

TMNTLover

Oh my god, this is so good so far! I can completely relate to Donnie, since I have similar fears... Don't really want to talk about it... Gonna read next chapter, and it's gonna be AWESOME!

TMNTLover

AWESOME STORY! For sure, a top ten! XD

Uh oh, April caught them ;)

Awww, its so awesome of how the brothers are looking out for each other _

PRAISE THE LORD, HE LIVES! XD XD XD

O.O ...*speechless*

Hang tight Leo!