I love it!

hope you can update it

Next week..yeah..about that. Will you update?
Its wird that after harry seemingly understood the danger of the diary he still started writting in it.
Anyway good story so far. Would definetly like to continue reading.

Ok ok I'm enjoying this so far. It's fast paced but not too fast and I can understand everything perfectly. I love how you made Harry; it fits him. I like Stephanie, and I guess she replaced Ginny as Malfoy's/Tom's puppet? Cool.

So are we gonna get some Hermione soon and if so, can she please be on Harry's side? I feel like they would understand each other and Harry would love her company

I loved it please update more

I am curious as to were you will take this i hope you will update soon.

cool update soon thanks

Has a promising premise :) and you write well. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Let Tom kill that girl! :D pleassse?

Please continue? Pleeaasee?

I am LOVING the start of this fic and truly cannot wait to read more!

Best of luck on your exams by the way! ;o)

At the moment I like to say your story has potential, it's okay if you like to skip the first years because there is not really something interesting happening but a problem is, that now we readers don't get the characters mapped out, Harry is at the moment the only one we have a idea how he is and even for him we see reactions but not explanations for his behavior (for example he is only a child but killed just another child with magic, I would like to know what he thinks or feels), so you should maybe in later chapters include flashbacks of significant moments in Harry's life or special interactions with other characters to inform the reader more about motives of a character and develope them more.
It would also be more interesting to read your story if you explain happenings more,
just some examples are that after reading the first two chapters I ask myself how exactly Harry knew the difference between dark and light magic and why he can feel it. I mean compare with canon if feeling the kind of magic would be so easy second year would never have happened so it would ne nice to have explanations, maybe you got it all planned out in your head but we readers don't and sure we can think out own reasons how these things happen but that would destroy a large part of the fun in reading your story and your point of view in it.
One last thing I would like to point out is that you said Nott got a new stepfather and that he will perhaps not be permanent. I think you got him confused with Zabini. In canon Zabini is the guy with X stepfathers and a mother who is called black widow while Nott seems to have a Death eater father or grandfather and I think no information about a mother, maybe it was no fault of you but then again it would be nice to get explained more when there are changes to canon.
At last I want to say that I really like the idea even if it's quite often used. Your Harry is maybe the most ruthless I read so far and I like that he made it in Slytherin with pure force which seem to represent a little bit Gryffindor in his ruthlesness because he is not subtle about it.

update soon!

Love this! It's a brilliant story. Looking forward to updates

It's Lily, not Lilly.