Reviews for Broken
Spazzman29 chapter 1 . 8/8
Did you have to add the rapey undertones of being forced to touch?
K chapter 1 . 7/27
A very interesting take on the aftermath of the war, and its effects on the couple. Most enjoyable.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22
Beautiful! Amazingly beautiful!
The Edible Scump chapter 1 . 3/31
Nice
N Flamel chapter 1 . 11/25/2019
Jack, Somehow I missed this story. As usual, it was a fun read, especially since Harry/Daphne is probably my favorite pairing. This one was different since Daphne kind of appeared out of nowhere as Harry was cataloging the many ways his life sucked. After getting them together, the story really took off and I'm still smiling over how they got out of the clutches of the backward Brit magical society. Plus, they have the next generation soon to arrive. Again, thanks for all the excellent work you've done on the behalf of HP fan fic readers.

I also wanted to let you know I saw your Sept 23rd announcement. It makes me sick you've been treated as you described. You've consistently provided entertaining stories for the HP fans at this site. As you pointed out, if a reader doesn't like your stories, find another writer. Pretty simple, isn't it? Jack, you're one of the good guys here. Thanks for putting in the time and effort to entertain us. Just wanted to let you know it is much appreciated. Hope you're doing well now. Best wishes, N Flamel
Sonia25 chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
This story so pathetic I would rather pick pansy than this daphne and I really don't know why people potrays harry like this the oh so noble and the ever so forgiving like it doesn't matter like he was not hurt or anything pathetic pice of shit writing
iStyx chapter 1 . 12/21/2018
That was... disgusting :(
zugrian chapter 1 . 5/21/2018
I normally love your work, but this story sickens me. This Daphne sucks & is gross. Harry deserves a lot better.

But the worst part is this is labeled as humor for some insane reason. It's called Broken for fuck's sake, and should be labeled as angst.
Ricky chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
Damn man, it’s a good story but Harry should have just dropped her. She talks about loving him but won’t go against her family to be with him. Harry should have just left her butt.
Fyreheart chapter 1 . 4/15/2017
Based on your back story, I'm actually sorry that Harry accepted Daphne back.
MartinDeShade chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
You say Draco gets the millstone of house Black, then you later say he is dead.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
Cool fic, would have also liked to have seen a more confident harry say "well I can't have damaged goods then now can I?' and walk away from her; going on the live happily ever after with someone who would not let family pride get in the way - probably not anyone he was in school with though, and OC would be best.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
Superb!
brad chapter 1 . 5/4/2016
i love your stories hope theres another one soon
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
Awesome story, id really like to read the story of Harry and Daphne when they were saying and going into muggle London
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