Reviews for The Gamechangers
Ahmed Maged chapter 5 . 2/13
Drooped
amerdism chapter 10 . 6/26/2019
Awesome story. I hope to see more soon. When’s the next chapter going up?
stylo1 chapter 1 . 4/23/2019
winning against the reapers and then going extinct by a civil war, how patetic, not to mention impossible a space faring race that spans the galaxy doesnt just go extinct. and even if it happend this way there would be way more prothean tech around
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2019
Why only have one shield equiped? If the civilisation has means of enormous generation of power and two various shield techs why not place at the very least both of those shield generators. At the very least a ship that would pass the minimum DAKKA requirment would be required to have three pairs of those shields all of the pairs should be powered by at the very least one power generator device. It is utter madness to only have one shielding tech, or power generator mounted on a space ship. Well one more strange thing is that from five billions after more than a hundred years the humanity only grown to 11billions. Ok they were fightning for suvrival there were major losses but it is understandable and logical that an Space Empire facing one enemy after the other would require for young people that go to war to leave at least two to three children. As a safeguard for future population. If such a trend would be born in Empire it would probably not change even after one enemy was grind into dust simply couse you do not know what is in the darkness.
007 chapter 1 . 11/2/2018
Magic? Really?
Junior VB chapter 10 . 11/2/2018
Not bad.
MattKennedy chapter 10 . 4/15/2017
Very cool and inventive story! :) Hope you continue it sometime.
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 10 . 3/7/2017
Very good
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
Also, your timeline has plotholes. You can't kill off 80% of the human race and then claim 150 years later they are at 5 billion in population. Population exploded previously because of a lack of birth control and before most diseases were cured, people needed to have 10 children to ensure 2 survived.
one.who.reads chapter 5 . 3/7/2016
I was kinda looking forward to reading a fix without turians.
CainBlack chapter 10 . 3/7/2016
Good Story.
I like the fantasy component.
Especially as magitech trumps norm tech as long as our magicans take the norm tech base and work from there, keeping up with it.
I hope you continue it sometime, I've clicked follow & favorite anyway.
Don't loose hope, some of your old readers and friends will come back if you stick to it, new ones will fill the gaps.
Bgbg chapter 3 . 3/5/2016
That's just retarded.
Akira Stridder chapter 10 . 3/5/2016
So far so good.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/25/2016
I had an idea that I thought would be an interesting story. It have humans that were just electro-mancers, cryo-mancers, pyro-mancers, and geo-mancers

The electros would be technologically advanced in electronics (like computers and cars) and be similar to gnomes in a place that is prone to lightning, the cryos would be artistically inclined and make cities of ice in/around an arctic like place.

The pyros would be great blacksmiths and craftsmen that are near a volcanic area (think dwarves) that are warriors and take pride in who is the better warrior or craftsmen, the geos would be miners and builders of vast underground cities and architecturally inclined and take pride in construction.

I have been a constant reader of your stories and thought you may like this idea, find it amusing, or maybe even useful. Thank you for reading my idea.
Kira Kyuu chapter 10 . 12/1/2015
Woo :D Thanks for the update! I'm sorry that this was hard to write, but I'm glad you've been able to push through it.
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