That was the perfect ruby!
A bit OOC but it's fine

They call him Dovahkiin, Dragonborn! “Fūs roh dagh!”

you must really like rubys ralts for him to keep it huh.
nice story though

Sapphire's hilarious. Ruby, no, Brendan's response to her action made me laugh.

One of those days Sapphire will destroy a house or a mansion XD That why she one of my favorite. Just be graceful the cops aren't after her yet...

Pfft. That ain't your good side huh, Sapphire? That's all you care about? Sheesh. I wonder if they'll meet up with Brendan soon. Their conversations are hilarious. XD

So far, this story is looking really good! Though I think you should make Brendan a bit more likeable (unless you wanted to make him an annoying character ofc) and also, I'd love to see a brendanXsapphire romance (so much comedic potential XD)

Also, this chapter was hilarious, gj on that, really!

Quite short. I notice you included the scene from the manga too. Hate me for saying this but that was quite dissapointing. You could at least make it differently. If you are going to keep copying from the manga, people will get bored and rather pick the manga instead. Sorry, can't always be nice.

Passing the Keystone: So, what does Steve posses? An overly affection over rocks?

Ruby's Behaviour: 'Smart' question Ruby. What's next, "do you wear an underwear or not?"

Well, another event done. Also, insights!

Aron Challenge: Of all people that this Dealable-Aron could meet is Sapphire who no way in hell will go for a peaceful negotiation. What are the odds?

The Breaking into the Office: You know, I find it strange that they don't have a single security Flying-type Pokemon flying above the building. I mean the Devon is like rich and famous, right? Shouldn't they thought about that kind of security?

Pfft. Oh my gawd. That, was just hilarious. XDXD That boulder part. AHAHAHAHAHAS!

Haha. Who do you prefer? Sapphire or May?

I laughed more than I should have at this. I love this story. It's very original and interesting. Keep it up!

I enjoy reading your stories. Although I'm not familiar with the game, the writing is clear enough for me to follow. Keep writing!

No offense, but you mispelled Brendan's name a lot. It's Brendan, not Brendon.

I guess Brendon can be quite rude against not so clean people. Im dying to see when Zinnia and sapphire meet each other, It will be really interesting and also I didnt expect steven stone and zinny working together solve the little armageddon that The Crazy Ecologist are trying to create.