this was wonderfully sweet, incredibly well thought out, fun, and not just a repeat of the game. loved this! very well done, and I can't wait to read more!

Ahhhhhhhh only just been able to read this cause of internet being down but totally considering it as a birthday present for tomorrow, you have no choice in this btw. Also it was so sweet! I'm melting right now _ can't wait for next fic, should be amazing if its anything like the other two *squeals*

Woohoohoo! You legit had me freaking out for a second but everything turned out fine! This was a great way to end part 1. Fluffy endings are always the best!

The main thing I'm wondering now is when they're gonna tie the knot. I already know how interesting the rest will be! Can't wait to read more!

OMG love love love love love! And more love love love love love love love! Thank you for sharing this beautiful story :)

Firstly may I say that it has been an absolute pleasure reading this story! I've never read a fanfiction that has made me so excited for a new chapter each time. You are incredibly talented and wonderful and I absolutely love you! Alright enough gushing, I know... it's all true though. I loved this depiction of Dorian and your inquisitor was wonderful as well. This story made me feel the characters like few have. I cannot wait to see what they next! Please don't ever stop writing!

I have no words on how this chapter made me feel. I pretty much fell in love with this story.

YES! "We go home" one thing I really wished the Inquisitor would have said instead of "We go back to Skyhold", you're amazing for putting both. Can't wait for the next part even though I'll be a sad mess while reading it.

Love it. Love everything in it

More feels and some amazing closure. I'd die if this fic ended with an actual proposal but at the same time I don't want it to end! I'm gonna be pretty bummed out when this is over, but this is a damn good read!

Yay! I love this scene on the game! Makes me so happy! And I'm glad that Dorian and Fitz finally talked! Sometimes they are so stubborn, and they definitely needed to have that conversation. I'm excited to see another happy scene with them together!

I've only made it to chapter 19, but I must say this story surprised me. At first I was put off with the dialogue following very closely with the game, BUT as the story unfolded and their love developed, I couldn't stop reading. Seriously wow omg I can't get enough. I will definitely be reading this more than once!

too many feels in this chapter. I do hope Fitz and dorian patch things up, the fate of my sanity is at stake now

I hated this conversation in game. Makes me sad. But I'm glad that in this version, you may actually be able to do something about Dorian leaving. I'm very curious about this device...what does it do? Time travel? Teleportation? Also, their bond will make the next sections very interesting.

Too many feels.

Ahhhhhh so good! I love the bond! I also love that your inquisitor drank the well - mine did too :D. And Morrigan is just entirely too pleased with herself and keeps too much hidden, so I think it's better that way. I love Dorian and Fitz! I'm curious to know more about this bond though and the implications that will have on their relationship and what they do in the future. I'm sad that this is coming to a close. I want there to be a part two!