Strangely enough, Iiked it. You're not heavy on what goes on in the bed, you moreso concentrate on therelatioship, which I think was very well constructed.

It was great lol, i think there should be a second chapter _

this ia an awsome story...that is, if u like yaoi and shonen-ai...

i reckomend reading this...it is a story 2 remember!

*cries* Beautiful. But it may not be, since I only read the beginning, the middle and the end...

CW: ~_~; That is the lot

Oh yeah... Anywho, COOLNESS and I shall be in Aus in ~ 8 weeks (approx.)

Anywho, 130 and tired (no caffeine...)

MAelgwyn & CW

Although it seemed out of character at first, the second time I read it made me feel all fluffy. It's actually very in character, like another side of them. I mean, they've got to get tired of all that evil-doing at some point. And I love how you had Hiltz so loyal to Prozen, in that other way. P

So damn cute! Nicely done.

SaZ~

Lovely. Very well writen.

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Hey Plink

did I tell you that your character made it. Cool story to!

Gotta make this quick since I have a research paper I need to be working on...but you already know what I think. You have a good balance between dialogue and description (one I tend to have problems with at times) and you fully explain any OOC in your characters. After all...all work and no play makes for a very boring person eh. _~

Keep up the great work *hugs plink-plushie*

~Skeyeta

Wow! You should be amazingly pround of this fic! It was cute, funny, had a nice bit of yummy stuff and stared two of the most hottest characters in Zoids! You should treat yourself to Hiltz's ice-cream.

I really love how you wrote the characters in this - especially the way you portrayed Ambient. He was just so damn cute, and I loved the way Hiltz and Prozen interacted with him.

I really hope you write more around this couple in the future - I'll lap it up!

Coolies I love the fic. it's Prozen and Hiltz on a lighter side! I really loved them but people tend to "bastardize" them. Ah those poor bishonen!

Weird, but cool. Never seen a Prozen x Hilz fic before so this is rather new to me. But nonetheless, well-versed, well-written and well-behaved... *motioning to Hilz and Prozen with a hentai grin on her face*

awww..cute cute cute. Now I feel all warm and mushy inside.

I find it odd that you didn't read the disclaimer *shrugs* ah well. It did explain the reason for it.

I like this. _ It's well written and I'd love to see your artwork of Zoids once you start drawing.