You captured Finn's character especially perfectly, and also smacked the nail on the head with Alicia's characterization. Phenomenal. Keep writing about this couple!

Please, PLEASE keep writing this!1 It is so good! And not out of character unlike some others that I have read. Just, please! keep writing!

Loving this!

This is great! I think you capture Finn perfectly with his snappy sense if humour. Love the story and can't wait for more!

So great. I adore the slow, winding pace and the way you keep the intensity and it stays engaging without having to pick up speed.

Like it!

Spectacular as ALWAYS ! Do you ever write a dud or at least a blaaa !? Your internal look and reveal with people wisdom seems ever so on-point. Your word usage expressions run seamlessly together. You're an "old soul" talented writer indeed ! Thank you so for your topical focus choice decisions and mindful approaches. Thank you for sharing your heart as well as your marvelous talents. Please do keep writing Alicia...and sometimes, with her Will flashbacks.

This was so perfect and the funny thing is I actually wrote a very similar line about him accusing her of picturing him naked yesterday lmao. It just feels like something he would totally say to tease her with Hahaha. Loved this as always :)

WOW I really like this chapter. I can wait to read the next chapter.

You are making me ship them in your fics now...