Reviews for Do Not Weep
kingofthewilderwest chapter 3 . 1/21/2019
I love how these are little slices in time. You choose a specific concept to write and you give it to us, that exact moment, nothing superfluous, but feeling very real. The brevity makes these even better. Each section lingers to the reader, memorable.
kingofthewilderwest chapter 2 . 1/21/2019
I think it's so cool that you're tying these drabbles (vignettes almost?) together through the poem, and how every title is based off another phrase of the poem. What a cool way to be inspired and to write something creative of your own! I love that concept!

The mood and atmosphere of this drabble is nicely painted. The way in which you weave information together about the stars, and Baymax, and Hiro remembering Tadashi... it creates a single atmosphere that works great. It's a little slice in time, and we're soaked in the moment.
kingofthewilderwest chapter 1 . 1/21/2019
I love this. Moving. Artful. The comparison of the autumn leaves versus the fire is effective and nicely done.
Lizzy chapter 5 . 3/2/2015
you said this would be cute. I did not come here to cry.
ItalianPrincess92 chapter 7 . 12/10/2014
ow this hurts :( very well written, though.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
I love the style you're writing it. The repetition and color imagery is great.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/6/2014
Gaaaaah so cute! The first chapter killed me, I cried. As for suggestions... maybe you could do a story about Hiro helping out Tadashi and his friends with some homework/ project problem they'd been having trouble with. That just sounds so adorable! Looking toward to what happens to Sam, and happy writing!
It's 11 past 11 chapter 3 . 12/3/2014
This is a very sweet series that is pretty underappreciated. Looking forward for the next update.
Ghostlycat chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
Awe. Me likey. :.)
Guest chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
Nice job!