OMG you always have a way of making me cry in the end because there's always so much emotion and love in your stories

ben voila un super fin !

l'Est c'est fait éclatée comme prévue

I loved both of your stories, but I think that you could have put some more details in and revised the grammar a little. I hope that you continue your writings of this series and write a few longer chapters next time.

Wow great story... Will there be more chapters to come?

Great chapter

wow it looks like kate and humphrey didnt make it in time.

Oh dear oh dear oh dear. Looks like Kate's a tad guilty, and the packs are more or less gone, most dead or left. Meanwhile, you have the couple who started this visiting the place- I wonder where you'll take this. Initially, there are great ideas all round!

What a setup, this looks to be an amazing story, if this chapter I anything to go by, can't wait for more!

Great chapter man cant wait for the next one.

please finish the story

Awesome start