Reviews for A Wild Love-Part Three
Aime Dimo chapter 1 . 6/1
Part 4
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18
Part 4 please
GOAT0099 chapter 1 . 12/9/2019
This is beautiful
But doesn't belong in the rated M rank... so yeah.
heartbell chapter 1 . 4/1/2018
Haha that again
Ciel Colefield chapter 1 . 12/13/2017
*sniffs* I didn't even know about this! *sobs* its so beautiful!
narutwo chapter 1 . 9/15/2017
I don't know why i like this so much, but i do. I just do. Hahaha
Crimson Hawk Wolf chapter 1 . 3/31/2017
I really enjoyed that one. It was cute the way naruto and the kids got alone lol
lovebishies chapter 1 . 1/2/2017
Super cute. Thanks for this
Sabrina Pierre chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
I loved it so muuuuch. omg, love it, really love it.
Creativity at its best chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
really liked the continuation
Morriganna chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
So cute! I would love more sequels!
jovysanchez17 chapter 1 . 5/22/2016
I'm glad I found the continuation! I loved that two-part story of Hunamanu life-style and Naruto and Hinata's mating, so I'm glad to see how their family life. I love the fact that Naruto is still the protective fox that he is, but I'm kind of saddened at the fact that Hinata's parents reached their demise due to that very same protectiveness. Well that's what I understood based on Hinata's description of the events.

Anyways, I love how the kids are either fox or bunny, I can definitely imagine them being hybrids in additional features like eating habits, but not general features like species and body structure; that would make them more of chimeras that Hunamanus. Nevertheless, fox Naruto and rabbit Hinata had produced children that are more of an apex predator than Naruto. If Bolt and the younger kid manages to become great hunters when Naruto finally teaches them the art of hunting then they'll be better apex predators than him, because it is general knowledge that strong omnivores are at the top of the food chain. Why else are humans at the top? We can survive with either meat or plant life, so like what Naruto said there's is practically nothing out of our menu.

I love how cute the interactions are between Naruto and his kits and bunnies. They definitely are annoying yet adorable offspring and I bet he's proud of them all. It made me laugh when almost all the kids have attacked their father, Naruto's outburst at the last part was my favorite. Anyways, I love how adamant Bolt is in learning how to hunt and I like the fact that Naruto thought about mating as his main reason in order to teach his son in the future. He wouldn't want his son to be like the poor snake in the beginning of the story who was not able to mate due to his poor hunting skills. Due to the fact that Hunamanus are part animal, i believe that it is nice that animal instincts and concepts are deeply embedded in their every day lives. Bolt is a pre-teen in this story, so it's good to see that Naruto is aware that his son needs hunting skills in order to properly convince another Hunamanu to be his mate.

I don't know if you'll continue this story, so is it wrong for me to imagine a Hunamanu Sarada as Bolt's future mate? Hahaha, it would also be good if Sarada is a predator Hunamanu who has greater hunting skills than him. That would make him very flustered and self-conscious and push him into bettering his hunting skills if he really does want her to be his mate. It would also be nice to see Naruto and Hinata's reaction to their eldest finally growing up and maturing. I bet they'll tease him a lot in order to rile him up, like how Naruto teased Bolt as an idiot in this chapter. Nonetheless, I'm still happy with how this continuation turned out. You did a great job in writing it, kudos my friend! :D
guest 8 chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
You thinknyou can do a pt2
Angi sleeps chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
That was really, REALLY cute!
Oh please do more chapters oft this beautiful story!
guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
I really wish you would continue with this. I really love the whole concept of fox Naruto and bunny Hinata and I kinda wish that there was more of it out there. I'd also kinda like to see how it was when Their first kit Bolt was born, little curious about how that could've been handled...
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