But what now?

Short and sweet. I always love reading this fic, it's one of my favorites.

very very good!

Nice one shot you made for this.

I found this story to be very enjoyable. I have not watched much of the new version of MotU but a thing I did want to see was Teela finding out that Adam was He-man. It just seemed very wrong to me that Adam (her best friend), Man-at-Arms (her father) and the sorceress (her mother) did not trust her with the secret of He-man. She has every right to feel betrayed.

I also had thought she should have been able to figure out He-man and Adam where one in the same. She is supposed to know Adam and things would, you'd think, slip; Adam or He-man having knowledge that the other shouldn't, making a gesture that reminds her of the other, etc. I'd also think that she would eventually become suspicious about He-man only showing up after Adam disappeared.

I just found this, and it's great! Coincidentally, I just bought the 2002 MOTU stuff, so it's very fresh in my brain.

I think you did an excellent job.

DV

ok next story. come one tell more. please

Wow, this belongs in a larger story. Well done. This is exactly how Teela discovering the secret should go down. Thanks for the great read.

AWESOME! _ Whadda ya mean "out of character"? That was spot-on!

Nice work on this.

I read the LJ thing on your profile...Hope you have more spare time at some point, and your life gets less hectic. You seem like a really good writer, and I'd love to read more He-Man stuff. _~

Write a sequel!

Great work, this is going on my favorites

Wow! This is really one gem of a story. The best "Teela discovers Adam as He-Man" story I've ever read. Too bad its a one shot though.
But perhaps, you could write an Adam version of this. It'll definately be fun to read ;)
Good story. I'm so gonna go sift thru the others now!

That was a great story.
Write on!.

Love it.

i thought your fic was prity cool good job :)