This was a reall good story it’s a pity it just stops.

It's been two years since the last update. Busy? You gonna come back? Cuz we're on the edge of our seats here.

Interesting story, I hope you return to it someday.

Been a while since your last update. Can we get one or another finished? Not that I'm one to talk, I have serious writers block on the follow-up to my story.

I like this story so far and am currently on chapter 6. You really have portrayed the characters, storylines , interactions, different protocols, strategies, and such amazingly well. This could easily pass for the pilot to the next big Stargate offshoot along the lines of Sg Atlantis and better than SGU.
P.s. I could use some help with a Sg1 crossover I'm working on. Let me know if you're interested.

1. Voz is one sick fuck.
2. This has Potential.
3. Only strike against your story is the lng time between update.

This Voz is turning out to be a classic big bad. Wonder what he is trying to find with his experiments?

It's a good story so far, but like your other works it is in dire need of a proofreader to correct all the grammar and homonym errors before you continue.

This is a good story i could almost imagine this as a star-gate TV show, and a successful one at that great job capturing the essence of star-gate

Hi there,

I have been looking for a new Stargate fic for a while. This seems like a cool story going forward.
I have a couple questions though?

Will there be new characters that join the main crew? (i.e. Tayla and Ronon from SGA)
What kind of new fandangled tech will there be?

I get that you probably don't want to spoilt it all, Obviously.

Here's hoping you keep this story going
Olaf

like this a lot

very good new chapter , i do wonder if the ascended Ancients , will do anything about this one , cant hardly wait for the next chapters .

very good story so far , but that lantian should realize that the tauri are the 5th Race . And have access to Atlantis , and are liberating the Pegasus Galaxy from the Wraith. And are also Aboard the Destiny across the Universe .hope you can update soon, can't hardly wait for the next chapters .

Good update.

Nuclear tipped anti-air missiles with a naquadah enhanced warhead would obliterate everything in sight. A naquadah enhanced missile, yes, nuclear, no.

Voz is too simple a name for an ancient, even a relatively lesser evolved lantean.