Reviews for While You Were Gone
moonkind chapter 25 . 7/1
I really enjoyed the car-scene with Gogo and Tadashi. It felt very real. I LOVE how you not only depict physical pain that comes with a bad injury but also the psychological pain and that a person is not the same afterwards. And I loved the helmet testing scene a lot. I'm hoping Tadashi will join Big Hero 6...but it's not that easy, is it? :D
Guest chapter 15 . 6/28
Hi! I really enjoy reading this story. I love Big Hero 6, and this fanfic does a great job of honoring the characters... but I hate that it has so many curse words. Would you consider doing a clean version for younger readers?
X4uth0r chapter 9 . 6/20
Heck yeah, Tadashi got a haircut! Wasabi could totally pull off being a hair cutter if he weren't so germophobic.

It was cool to see Gogo's reactions in this chapter. The part about the gym bathrobe being "acquired" made me laugh, but also her reluctance to see Tadashi in his 'weaker' state added depth too. Nice job!
X4uth0r chapter 8 . 6/20
Aww of course Hiro would want to keep the trach tube. That little hoarder :) also super awesome touch at the beginning, Wasabi bringing tea every week to his memorial. I bet there's a good backstory behind that one ;)
X4uth0r chapter 7 . 6/20
I like the little details. When someone dies, I don't really think about what's going to happen to their social media accounts or throwing away their most recent toothbrush. It's cool watching Tadashi go through that process of... heh, I guess processing stuff.
Shiranai Atsune chapter 25 . 6/14
Yey! A new update!

So long, so good, so worth the wait!

Still love this!
theonlineidofme chapter 25 . 6/15
I liked the ups and downs of this chapter. The frustrations the groupand not just Tadashiare feeling, then the bonding over...not silly young adult things because super hero helmet and shenanigans to break it lol, but certainly much more light-hearted. And then that brotherly talk at the end was a good touch. I look forward to seeing where this goes from here
DinoGuy2000 chapter 25 . 6/15
Ha ha! Another excellent chapter! I quite enjoyed Tadashi and GoGo making up a bit, and testing the helmet. Wonderfully amusing!

Good work!
actresspdx chapter 1 . 6/14
I'm rereading this tomorrow!
moonkind chapter 24 . 6/9
When I saw you updated, I re-read everything to get into the story again and THE FEELS AHHH. I love your writing style and this story so much. And it never occurred to me that Tadashi might not be able to do his degree because of his burns. Concerning your thoughts about the series: I get what you mean. And I also miss the angst from the movie, haha. But the last few episodes of season 1 are SO GOOD, they do feel more like the movie. So if you don't want to watch the whole series just watch episode 21 till the end of season 1. Haven't seen season 2 yet so I don't know if it's good.
A Sky Bison chapter 24 . 6/5
i haven't logged in in such a long time but i saw you updated, and i still have so much fondness for this story 33 i still love the way you're handling tadashi's trauma and the effects of everything that has happened around him. I have been rereading some chapters as a refresher, and you hit the "healing is not linear" so well. I'm glad he's not stopping Hiro from being on bh6, even though i do truly understand why he would.
Love that line in ch.23 where cass tells Hiro they have to take care of one another, they both have been through a Lot (even if hiro seems ok now, but i'm not sure if he's truly fine, or if he's just ignoring his own trauma bc his brother is alive so he thinks there's no point of having an emotional whiplash over everything that has happened?)
Thank u for writing this chapter and for still updating, im exciting to see where you take this story 3
X4uth0r chapter 6 . 5/31
"Make sure you hit on cute nurses!" Lol, Fred. I feel like Aunt Cass is the best person to deal with reporters. I'm glad the bombshell finally hit! Hope Tadashi can handle it ok- but he's got people to support him, too :)
X4uth0r chapter 5 . 5/30
Awww I feel so bad for Tadashi. He's still in pain, working through everything... and yet he is completely out of the loop. I just want him to be ok and get out of the hospital :( I also hope Hiro and Baymax can help him out a bit
X4uth0r chapter 4 . 5/30
I like seeing Tadashi's thoughts as he's processing things. I also enjoy how you capture thoughts in general (I try to do this too :). I think a lot of authors can overuse italics and direct thoughts. Personally, it feels a lot more natural to write 'general' thoughts within regular paragraphs (I'm struggling to explain this, but I hope you get the idea).
czarcasm chapter 24 . 5/27
AHHHHHH THIS STORY IS AMAZING, I’M SO GLAD YOU’RE CONTINUING IT! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK HSMAIFJ (also poor tadashi :(( I really hope things get better for him)
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