Reviews for The Lightsaber
asingh123 chapter 3 . 7/10
This is the chapter where everything falls apart... nd I come back to chicken and egg question

It started so well, and already has so much potential... What's the point of putting in more

Not every Luke Skywalker needs a Obi Wan or Sidioius to become more..
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 26 . 6/28
I loved this story. I was so i vested in it, plus I really was looking forward to Tonks and Harry finally getting together. I wonder what will happen next?
The Crimson Alchemist 56 chapter 11 . 6/6
I don't know if it was your intention but when the mysterious man in black said my name is of no importance whatever voice I might have given him was replaced by Xemnas. This is super cool and I am eager to see more.
blueknight0712 chapter 26 . 5/8
Who is Harry's wife? What happened after that?
blueknight0712 chapter 1 . 5/7
Harry x Fleur, not many crossover stories have this pairing.
HardlightArtemis chapter 21 . 5/2
Just a continuity issue, Harry didn't destroy Dumbledore's stuff untill the end of fifth year, after Sirius died
Bronze chapter 2 . 4/9
Ya, I'll say Harry was exaggerating! 600 kilos equals 1322.77 pounds so, ya, I think he was exaggerating! But Big D did need to lose some weight and Harry needed to desperately fix his eyesight. One thing does jump out at me immediately. If Harry could find this potion to fix his eyesight WHY didn't Poppy, a fully trained Medinurse, not know of it or not offer it to Harry? I smell a meddling old man too interested in his greater good than the welfare of his students. I also remembered that this same meddling old fraud had himself declared Harry's Magical Guardian. Now correct me if I'm wrong but isn't a Magical Guardian SUPPOSED to look out for the best interests of the child he/she is the Magical Guardian of? If so, then what does that say about how well Fumblemort has done for Harry? As to why Snape never said anything? The man can't see past his own bad childhood with Harrys' father.
Bronze chapter 1 . 3/29
Ya know, one of these days I'm actually gonna get to finish this! I can't even tell you how many times I've started this! I've gotten as far as Harry fighting his way out of Hogwarts and flying to a town where Werewolves live peacefully. Then my computer decides to dump everything I'me reading and I have to start over. But unfortunately, when I do I don't always remember ALL the stories I was reading. And I really like this story too! So I'm making another try at reading the whole thing.
rumpelbrick chapter 2 . 3/24
small pet peevesteel is about 3 times denser than granite.
a 60 second google search would've told you that.
WordSmyth chapter 3 . 3/16
Not particularly jazzed about the new guys or OCs or whoever they are. Voldie is usually a sufficient Big Bag for Harry, but the writing is good enough so far I’m willing to see where this is going.
Arkisenn chapter 10 . 3/12
Well now I get the warning in the summary. I always suspend my disbelief in fanfiction, but this chapter showed me why it needed to be stated. I doubt I have to say why, but for the sake of the review...

It's because of the excuse for why the Death Eaters wont use the lightsaber despite its clear advantages. It feels both weak and forced. It ruins the tension of Draco even finding the plans. Maybe something will come from the three new sorcerers. But the execution here makes me feel like the resolution will be both quick and unsatisfying.
jmw03u chapter 26 . 3/12
This has been a very interesting story. I think the elements of sorcery being linked with the force are cool. I also like the magitech stuffalthough I think putting all of that together in the one story made things kind of crazy. It's good that you are taking a break to sort things out in your head. I can see how someone might get lost. I have very much enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing it.
JaxiusTharn chapter 10 . 3/3
damn you draco and good work voldy
rmw5763 chapter 26 . 1/5
Bummer, it ended. Not Abandoned, lol.
rmw5763 chapter 20 . 1/4
This must be completed or sadly ABANDONED :-(. Don't know. MAY 2019? REALLY?
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