where the bell was Duke hiding! it's driving me nuts!

A fun story, I really enjoyed it!

I can't believe this only has 9 reviews. You deserve a hell of a lot more. This was a really well written story, and I enjoyed that you wrote it from the agent's perspective rather than any of the Haven characters. You did a great job with all the characterizations and the plot was great. Honestly I can't find any criticisms to give you. I know that's not helpful, but its how I feel. Great job all around!

This story was amazing! The characters were so right. I hope you keep writing about Haven and let us know who won the poll ( my bet is for Nathan, though ;). Congratulations!

This is by far the best Haven Fanfic I've read since the show aired all those years ago. I loved the way you wrote Audrey and the way you somehow kept Duke achingly present without actually being there. The actual plot you managed to weave into this is simply stunning, full of twist and turns that kept me on the edge of my seat. I did not put this down even once. You did an amazing job, kudos to you!

Oh, this is finished! :D Cool.

Well, I throughly it. The fall-out was realistic, and I loved Jack and Duke finally meeting. So, Jack resigned and Don transferred... Well. I loved the return of the creepy lady :P And the mention Beattie's lighthouse, hahah.

Aww, somehow Don and Jack think that Parker is stupid? She would notice if she was tailed... So... Duke has been hiding in Parker's bedroom. LOL. He's been neighbors with them, hahah.

But poor guys, no resolution.

They really, really shouldn't be underestimating Audrey Parker. And I totally loved Nathan's reaction toward the accusation. Oh, boys...

LOVE this story! Can't wait to see how it concludes!

Ooh. My, my. Two chapters in less than one hour. Yay. Jack and Don gossiping about Audrey's love life... Sorry guys, it's still gossiping, even if you're gossiping about other people gossiping. But I like the idea of the townspeople betting about Audrey's love-life, and of course Duke is a candidate :)

They found out about Audrey being FBI, and that her expertise was fugitive retrieval. Of course she knows the tricks, due to that fact.

That lady was totally strange... and just so Haven! Little to bad that they didn't go to see the Teagues, because I would totally have loved Vince and Dave stonewalling them :)

I like Jack and Don being total 'eyes closed' to the strange things of Haven, and Jack psychobabble about Duke and Audrey. Duke is still in town! Yay! :)

I throughly enjoyed the agents finding out about Audrey and Parker's friendship - what a good way to do it through Julia, who knows what's going on - but isn't in in the inner circle.

Now I'm curious if Audrey really did tip Duke off, because it sure looks suspicious. Wonder if the agents are gonna figure out that Audrey was once a FBI agent...

Really enjoying your outsiders' POV - nice way of exploring the Haven mystery and oddly, considering Duke hasn't even appeared and the others are still fairly peripheral, the characters are all 'there' in the revelations. I'm liking Jack and Don too for their humour and scepticism and bemusement.