Quite interesting. Most excellent.

Much better then I expected. I thought it might be a PWP story but because I have read some of your other works I decided to give it a try. Very happy I did. This kept me entertained long enough for the sleeping pills to kick in so I can blissfully sleep in about 20 minutes. Cheers. :)

Fantástico!
Me Encanto

Fantástico!
Me Encanto!
Un Poco Apagada La Reacción Pero Fantástico

Fu#K.
Me Encanto

Overall a simple tale, quite readable and an easy read. I popped to your page (found you via greenchild24, who had this down as one of his favorite stories.) and I noticed that you appear to write shorter stories. Not complaining, nor disparaging in anyway. Hell, I can't write worth a hoot, but I do like to read and I very much appreciate you and the others that are willing to share their works with the rest of us.

For me this story is a good example of a mountain stream in the spring, after the main snow melts. It flows smoothly down it's path with little ripples here and there, but over all it gets from it's beginning to where it eventually joins with others. A good place to stop and relax, take in the view around you and just chill (if that phrase is even used anymore, hey, my hair is, and has been grey for some time). A pleasant read and I appreciate it. Thanks.

Very cute, if a little cheeky. I like it!

I don't understand how an erotic orgy story can be so funny and not cause a stiify. I'm confused.

Well Lisa, a soul bond is only the single most overused cliche in fanfiction. But, it is also immensely funny to read about and gives an excuse for easy giggitys and a small harem of a million women that part where David gives up should be when a self insert is added of the author appearing and laughing at the comedy I guessed 47, not far off the mark for our little master of death

padfoot AND prong VS prong jr. Harry wins hand down on number of "conquest" anyone realise that Flitwick would likely be quite impressive

awkward shenanigans are occurring as Harry steals all the smart/nice/pretty girls or a combination thereof. Anybody wonder on the fallout of this. boys aren't stupid but would realise that he married like half his year. Harry would notice he can't please so many people. And the Ms. Potter' would feel jealous or confused or maybe outraged that moment you realise why you like all the details first when you say something stupid people struggle with the issue that Ginny is not a character that should be bashed. sure her mother may slip Harry potions and she doesn't like it when he dates others but she is in love with him and it's highly unlikely that she would approve of it. even metope gaunt didn't keep the potions feeding up

you mentioned she became less than sane, pray tell, when was she sane in the first place

question is why they don't organise an accident beforehand

Haha, the Toad gets shafted and not in the way she wanted. Serves her right.

Very fun story.. Well Done.